Very nice. Very interesting. Good beginning. I sound like a critic lol.
Yes well I'm loving most--most possibly all--of your fanfics (ahaha...) and I'm really taking a liking to this fanfic! I dunno if this is on hiatus or you're busy (sorry if I'm bothering you with this review if you are busy) but I would like to see what happens next and why Aerith cross dressed to be in the army. Ah well I'll wait to see (uh...read) what happens next.

What significance does the white materia have besides being a sign of royalty? Cloud is a pompous, arrogant fool. Poor Aerith. To bad Barret or Cid is not around to keep spikey in line.

Now THIS looks like something I could read. I like it quite a bit so far, and the AU status means I'm less likeing to get upset about portraying Cloud and Tifa ooc.

About my email address, it didn't show up in the other one, so I'll try again. I put spaces there, but there really aren't any.

green . mary 11 at(you know the symbol) yahoo . com

I'm sorry. I suck NOTORIOUSLY at anything computer related. If it doen't show up this time, maybe I'll start an account here.

Hey, hey! Another great fanfic from u as usual! I cant wait to see more of this!! =D

My dad used to watch Sharpe ALL the time when I was younger but I never paid any attention lol. He's still in to it and has the box set. Maybe I should watch it and see where the influence comes from .

Keep up the good work!

Oh! That was really awesome.
Okay.
Awesome doesn't describe how absolutly, spectacular that was! I can't wait for you to finish it :D

The story-line is very intriguing. I know you have tons of stories to constantly update, but please hurry with this one. ^__^

Nice AU scenario! I'd been thinking of doing one like it myself for a while (not CA) but never got enough time and inspiration together for it, so it's great to read yours.

OH I'm going to punch Cloud in the face XD LOL very good! Ack short chapter >.< when are you gonna update all of your stories! And I thought I had it bad! well i love it as usual! cant wait for the update!

Hey Beeria! ^_^

I SO want to see where this is going. Your writing, as usual, is good and at a good pace and fun to read.

Heh heh, how Mr. Biggs suggested Aeris being a ...toy of sorts. :p

I hope you update soon. Take care!! ^_^