This is so absolutely, vividly right that I believe it could be passed off as a missing chapter. Funny, quirky, neatly written, and all-round shiny. And more funny.

Awesome! funny and creative and it conveys the tone of the original well too. I really enjoyed it.

Very much keeping with the original style! Something about your tone just seems to fit Pratchett...can't imagine why...

Ok - short but enjoyable. I like lots!

“Oor-oob ur oos?”

Wow, that doesn't sound suspiciously like 'ourobouros' AT ALL, does it?

...oh, boys.

Loved the Red Dwarf reference!

Random fic, but I like it. You have a nice writing style. The ending was a tad bit abrupt though.

I have only one thing to say: LOL! I'm glad they changed it! And the stuff Crowley was talking about was so freaking hilarious!

I loved it! As humor it perfect. I really enjoyed and laughed. Thanks!