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| hotflower901 2008-03-22 ch 1,  | abuseI like your take on the time line |
| Vera Steine 2008-03-19 ch 1, | abuseWhat a great idea! And a wonderful ending. I like the way you use the time each time to build up to the end. Great story! |
| templremus1990 2008-03-19 ch 1, | abuseWoah. Really, seriously powerful stuff. The kind of fic that makes you want to read each line over and over, just so it doesn't end. Favourited, and I'm off to re-read yet again. |
| CariadFach 2008-03-18 ch 1, | abuseOh. My. God. Wow. Seriously... wow. This is so good. Brilliant. Fantastic. AMAZING. Can't even begin to say how good this is. Don't you dare alter it, or try to do a sequel or anything daft like that. Wow. I am officially impressed. |
| LoisLane95 2008-03-18 ch 1, | abuseOh wow. That was captivating. Poor Rose :( And Poor Jack, all alone... |
| Emily 2008-03-18 ch 1, anon. | abuseIt's very nice, a very good read. I like the line, "Earth was not one of the twenty civilisations Jack picked." Adds a bit of humor to lighten the inevitably sad ending. |