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This was amazing!

I like your take on the time line

What a great idea! And a wonderful ending. I like the way you use the time each time to build up to the end. Great story!

Woah. Really, seriously powerful stuff. The kind of fic that makes you want to read each line over and over, just so it doesn't end.
Favourited, and I'm off to re-read yet again.

Oh. My. God. Wow. Seriously... wow. This is so good. Brilliant. Fantastic. AMAZING. Can't even begin to say how good this is. Don't you dare alter it, or try to do a sequel or anything daft like that. Wow. I am officially impressed.

Oh wow. That was captivating. Poor Rose :( And Poor Jack, all alone...

It's very nice, a very good read. I like the line, "Earth was not one of the twenty civilisations Jack picked." Adds a bit of humor to lighten the inevitably sad ending.