Wow, that is some dark writing. I loved it. I'm still chilled to the bone by the depth of it. I love your writing style, the way you were able to portray Casey's emotions from beginning to end, and you could see the change in her spirit as the story continues- the darkness growing heavier over her eyes. From the story it almost sounds like you yourself have gone through these things, or have known someone who has. If you have or have not it does not matter either way. The imagery and reality of this story is so overwhelming I am left with thoughts about it even after reading it. The failure to save Casey from her lack of will to live is my favorite piece of this, and the little mention of Shakespeare's plays and what they were known for, "Tragedy" like this whole story. Depressing yes, but delightfully so.

x- kairi. irl

I love this story it had a real feel to it cause stuff like this does happen to ppl. And As a person who has been though Depression i know about some of it. I have to say as prob. most everyone felt who read this i did not want Casey to die! And i cried my eyes out when she did. But i do understand why you had her die in the story. I think i pretty much cried in the last 5 chapters! The story was sad/ bitter sweet. I Love how you ended it! With Lizzie and Edwin and Marti and Derek And Emily and with there child being named Casey! I just wanted to say that you are a great writer and that this story though it may have been at times hard for you to write and ppl to read. That is is really good and it teaches you something. Like you said at the end
"never let you take anything or anyone for granted." or to never let anyone feel unloved! And for all that i want to THANK YOU!

this was a good story i mean for dark dasey.
But i'm a bit confused is that the very end or are you writing more?

I just read this whole storya dn was so sad! Derek loved her, and she kileld herelf! -cries- okay, but I do have a question. Was Casey pregnant when she killed herself? I don't think it said if she was or not, but if it did im sorry! The storyw as awesoem, and I loved the whole darn thing! Great job, awesoem fanfic. Great writing. All time, favorite story!

I stayed up all night reading this and I believe that it was very close to perfection. This story was beautiful, heartbreaking, and truthful about events that could happen. And I would like to tell you that this story had me crying and laughing and, once, sobbing and I would like to say awesome job!

Amazingly written, this is the best Dark Dasey I've ever read..

Beautiful.

This is the first dark Dasey that I've actually liked. To be honest, adored. Kudos.

I'm excited to read this. Just an FYI, all right is two words, not one. I didn't learn that until last year.

To say the least, this was VERY powerful.
It was very dramatic, sad and moving. And it was VERY well written. I followed the entire thing (didn't skip over sentences like i sometimes do) and couldn't stop reading. I'm actually amazed at how well this was written. So, great job! And continue writing!

oh man..
This is story is fantastic, I couldn't stop reading, I forgot everything in order to continue/finish it...heheh.
I love the caracthers, and how Daphne is one of Derek's personalities.
And I had tons of fun with the author's notes, I feel like I know you now!
And I love the ending! You should try get this thing publish! Change the names and send around!

Congratulations on awesomeness

I cried for the last three chapters. I can't believe how time flies when I read this story. I looked at the clock an hour ago and it feels like only 10 minutes have past. I couldn't put your story down. Well, I couldn't close the window on my computer screen.

Very engaging, kind of dramatic. I am not sure when this happens in real life. Well, not to this extent. My brother is a schizophrenic and it actually erupted when he was a sophomore in high school. I guess life is sort of dramatic.

Casey still seems hidden. I know that I read her thoughts and I watched her suicide, but I still feel like she is a mystery. I think that is what you wanted in the last chapters, but I am not sure.

Anyway, thanks for that piece of writing. truely touching.

This story was amazing. It was definately depressing, but done in just the right way. So often you read fanfiction tragedies with hate and gore that are completely void of talent or truth. After finishing this I have tears in my eyes and have truly been moved. This was a beautiful tragedy, one that Shakespeare himself would be proud of.

AH. I cried during so many chapters! This is the first fanfic I've ever cried during, so feel dang special. Hahah, amazing fanfic.

i actually cried these last few chapters

jordan