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FairyQueen00
2009-08-19 . chapter 2
very good.
glad ethan got the girl.
its about damn time.
glad you arpporached pairings differently.
but i still love warren/oc.
SilverShadow
2009-08-19 . chapter 2
Very cute. Love the whole thing.
Sucks you're leaving those. You always kept the characters in canon.
Aimee1994
2009-08-18 . chapter 2
Aww. You write the SH characters really well! But, I'm glad that Ethan got the girl. It's about damn time he stole her away from Warren! =P
PFY
2009-08-06 . chapter 2
Hey, great story
I kinda felt sorry for Ethan at the end of the movie; nice to see him finally get a girl!
Thanks for raising the average quality of SkyHigh fanfiction

p.s.
Perhaps Ethan needs one of those 'Slippery When Wet' signs :D
Real Words
2009-08-04 . chapter 2
I don't think I caught anything wrong with this story. Mind you, I normally don't like OCs, but I feel what you think with Ethan. It was about time he found the girl.

I will comment on her powers. The ability to do that to her nails? It made me grit my teeth, but it did make sense in a way.

Congratulations on getting out of Sky High (pardon the pun). Good luck with focusing on a better fandom.
kitcool
2009-07-23 . chapter 1
This story is so wicked please continue
Protector of Canon2
2008-04-14 . chapter 1
Interesting.

I'd sort of like to see a story where Ethan gets the girl.
Solance99
2008-03-30 . chapter 1
Haha. That was cute. I love Ethan.
Scrappy maggie
2008-03-25 . chapter 1
YES!
A non-Warren story! finally. ethan gets the girl, good for you! I don't think anyone's OOC, and Meg's not a Mary-Sue, not at all. and i loved the Zachianna/Ethananna thing! that was brilliant
FictionNERD
2008-03-23 . chapter 1
I hail you. All I've been reading while going down this page is WarrenOC. I HAIL YOU!

Anyways, I didn't notice anything wrong with it. Megan's power is actually...yes disgusting but different.

I like it.

~FiccyNerd
Britneyy Peace
2008-03-23 . chapter 1
Oh hey you're back with another story. I love how it's centered around Ethan. We need more EthanOC stories out there.

Haha, you're right. This fandom is mostly about Warren and Lash.

Well, I like it. There isn't any grammar problems. You're telling the story well so far!
Johannas mirror
2008-03-22 . chapter 1
I like this.
Aimee1994
2008-03-20 . chapter 1
OMG! AN ETHAN STORY! I AM VERY HAPPY!

Whew, enough with the CAPS. Wow, I am happy though an Ethan story finally came through. The OC isn't a Mary Sue, or doesn't seem like one. Interesting and odd power...being about to grow your nails? Yikes!

Ethan seems in character. I think this is a story to read.
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