Innaccuracy: Grunts and Jackals cannot become Infection forms. Too little biomass and amount of calcium.

Wow, great story. Reminds me strongly of the Fall of Reach. I don't really know if the idea of Jenkins having a brother fits into the Contact Harvest series of events, but nice character reference anyway.

By the way, your Corporal Mikhael reminds me of my ("Cleansing" character) Sergeant-Reverend Michaels. Well, they're both black, their names are similar and Michaels has a mustache.

Keep it up!

nice`!

Sweet! Enjoyed it

Very well done!

I like your story, very creative. I hope you update soon. I like the first-person talking, it's always nice to read that. Keep it up. Check out my Halo story. It's called Halo: The Uprising.