i need a black hole please in singapore
i got a bad dream at night we can fix
the black hole i can go back in time
to attack the bullys names are
amada tan, arassi, and jessica scully
of course my mother mind control
in the past, present and future.

good story but it's true

theres a lot of questions

...but I have 1 of the same

"Why was Charlie riding that thing to school?"

but like Zeke said

some things you just never know...

Good point(s).

Here's mine, How come there was a 'wanted' poster for the 'snowsuit guys' the day before they decide to go back in time to help people? *eyebrow raise*

Anyways, very funny, very in character, and very true.

-Cloudy

Hello there. I really enjoyed this little fic. I had the same mindframe after the movie, and I love how you addressed the minutiae of the film that were glossed over. All the characters were spot on (I love Zeke especially) and this fic was all-around great. Of the fourteen Minutemen fics, yours is the best by far. It isn't slash (nothing against slash, but I like canon couples for the most part) and it has proper grammar. In my book, it's fantastic for the fun outlook on things that can't be explained sometimes. Great job!

MGS