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| Allison McDonnell 2008-05-31 ch 5,  | abuseI love that the Dreamplane seems to be turning into a party line for Eden Advance. The idea of "Mom," as well as Danziger and Bess' new connection to the planet is sort of creepy, but it's a good creepy. I also like the distrust brewing from the rest of the crew who aren't directly involved in the Dreamplane excursions. Very well written and looking forward to more. |
| lfvoy 2008-03-22 ch 5, | abuseAgh! You've left me in suspense wanting to know what happens next. I'm enjoying this, although I'll admit that it's a little creepy to see the Dreamplane becoming more important than the "real" world. Of course, you may be doing that deliberately, so I'm just going to hang in there. :) |