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| Quiet and Invisible 2008-03-24 ch 1, | abuselove the part where the moon leaves because bella's beauty overshadows her own cute |
| Bronzehairedgirl620 2008-03-20 ch 1, | abuseI thought it was beautiful - a very good analysis of Edward and Bella's relationship. I love how you did it in EPOV; those are hard to come across that are well written and portray their love clearly. Very nice job! Bronzehairedgirl620 |
| Ruby-Wednesday 2008-03-19 ch 1, | abuseThat was really sweet and well-written. I loved the line about the moon. |
| tinkerbell056 2008-03-19 ch 1, | abuseThat was too cute! |
| sara-bella-snow white 2008-03-18 ch 1, | abuseThis was really sweet. I think it fit pretty well with Edward's character, too. I loved the fifth paragraph most--it was lovely how Edward described Bella and how you used personification when you wrote about the moon being jealous of Bella's beauty. Great job!! If you don't mind also, would you mind reading my story, "A New Life"? Best of luck! -Sara |
| xtina-chan 2008-03-18 ch 1, | abusethat's really really cute ^_^ nice job |