Help
Home Just In Communities Forums Beta Readers Dictionary Search
Reviews for: In My arms
Aaron
2009-03-19 . chapter 1
sniff sniff KIBA!... naw but it was a good story well not when kiba had to die but before that it was good
Nejifanxkibahina
2008-08-21 . chapter 1
sadness :'[
1Hirotamoy1
2008-08-03 . chapter 1
This was a good story...really good, but it left me crying in the end.:( (sniff,sniff,sniff)
ReinSohma
2008-07-28 . chapter 1
I'm going to kill you for killing off Kiba. >.< NO! I almost cried. I want to cry. That's just too sad.
Jiraiya's mistress
2008-07-18 . chapter 1
*cries*...well...*cries*...it was...*cries*...so sad...*cries*...DAMIT YOU GOT ME CRYING LIKE A BABY...*CRIES*
ChronosNumberVII
2008-07-05 . chapter 1
This is about the 50th time i've read the fic, it's really well written. I don't know if i'll write a kibahinata fic but if i ever do, i won't be as good as this. i like all 3 of these stories, you're really good at writing angsty fics. Keep up your good work!
Wink13
2008-04-18 . chapter 1
Holy crap that made me cry, and im a dude. wow that was amazing *clap*
hatakekuri45
2008-03-31 . chapter 1
aw
it made me cry
please make another one!
Edward Cullen's Sweetheart
2008-03-28 . chapter 1
Thats so sad.
Animal king
2008-03-21 . chapter 1
Why did you make Kiba die!Make the story all over again!!And this time make Naruto die!
animefreak469
2008-03-19 . chapter 1
That was the saddest thing i evr read...GREAT JOB!(Sniffle) I hardly EVR cry at fics, but i cried from this 1! Poor Kiba (sniffle) WHY DID HE HAVE 2 DIE! (Starts crying)
Kairi and Cloud
2008-03-18 . chapter 1
This didn't start badly at all! There had to be a way to transition from Naruto and Hinata's pleasant date into Kiba's tragic ending, and I thought that using stars to bring up Kiba was brilliant. I also loved the way you brought Hinata's POV into the picture. From the last fanfic I gathered that she just didn't care anymore, but that was actually Kiba avoiding her...something that I could totally see him doing. I really enjoyed the fact that Hinata was really worried, and not cold and uncaring like I thought she was. The way that you brought both Kiba's POV in the first fanfic and Hinata's POV in the second made me realize that this was even more tragic that I had originally thought, especially when you add the fact that Hinata loved Kiba all along, but didn't realize it until it was too late. Makes me wanna cry...*sniff sniff*

And silly Kiba broke his promise...I really hope that Hinata's prayer will be answered and that the two of them will be together in heaven.

And I checked out your profile before I read this! *HUGS* I'm so happy that you like my work so much ^^ I really feel compelled to dedicate something to you now, seeing as how you dedicated this to me! That makes me such a happy little author!

Thanks for the sequel! I'm really glad that you posted it, and in such little time too! I wish I could update as fast as you haha. I'm pretty jealous ^^

~ Cloud
Return to Top