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| PinkAngel17 2008-03-31 ch 2, | abuseGreat story! I hope there'll be more. |
| nonhalema 2008-03-24 ch 2, | abuseLove it wonderful work |
| mabelreid 2008-03-23 ch 2, | abuseI'm glad that Morgan is taking care of Penelope and that he understands the power of words to hurt us. I like the very lost line. So true! |
| dayana82 2008-03-23 ch 2, | abuseYAY! Taking the first step! :D That was so sweet and it's a little mean that you leave us hanging about the rest. :) But it was really great, I loved it! *sighs* If only they dared letting something like this happen on the show. Anyway, thumbs up and keep up the great writing work you do! Caro |
| deal4321 2008-03-23 ch 2, | abuseI'm so glad that Derek wants to further what he has with Penelope. Can't wait to see where their 'baby steps' go! |
| bahjcb 2008-03-22 ch 2, | abuseOh yeah! Great chapter! |
| Karma84 2008-03-22 ch 2, | abuseAwesome Job. is there a 3rd chapter in the works? |
| Harleyzgirl 2008-03-19 ch 1, | abusePowerful lesson. You actually made my eyes water. Will there be more? The story isn't marked as complete. |
| bahjcb 2008-03-19 ch 1, | abuseSo what's he going to do? :) I'm glad you're feeling better. |
| deal4321 2008-03-18 ch 1, | abuseI can't wait to see what Derek does now. Great start! :-) |
| dayana82 2008-03-18 ch 1, | abuseThis story is not complete, right? Because I can't be! I need MORE! :D BTW, you did remove your other story, right? I can't find it anymore and I was so desperately waiting for an update. Huggles! |
| mabelreid 2008-03-18 ch 1, | abuseI like this. Garcia is right, words have more power to hurt us then anything else in the world. It's good that she got Morgan to see that. Good work. |