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Sliver of Melody
2009-12-12 . chapter 14
Awesome chappy! I loved it.
Mimaindi
2009-12-11 . chapter 14
Fantastic chapter. It was really cute
CrystalMind
2009-12-09 . chapter 14
I sincerely want you to know how cute I find this story. I think that I may be in love, actually. :) (With the story, not with you. I'm not a stalker, I swear. >.>)

Despite using a common plotline (Harry is rescued from the Dursleys by unknown family/family friend/kind stranger) you're pulling it off well. I like that the pilots are uncertain about their abilities to raise a child-- it makes them human. Be sure to hold onto those emotions.

The only thing so far that I've found disorienting is how young Harry acts. His behavior is still beliveable due to his background, but I can't help but think that he sounds younger than nine on paper...

I'll definitely be following this story, though. I wish you luck.
brightsun89
2009-12-09 . chapter 14
I love it and I can't wait for more!! please update soon!!
Arid Tundra
2009-12-06 . chapter 14
Just found this story and it's very good for a bit of harmless fluff.

I'd love to see Harry speak Parselmouth... I'm envisioning a scene in which Quatre finds Harry in the backyard chatting with a snake coiled around him. Now that would be quite a surprise.
Anon and anon
2009-12-06 . chapter 14
Yay for more Harry! I like how the wizarding world is starting to bleed into the Gundam's day-to-day lives... and the line about Dorothy's eyebrows is pure win.

Thanks for an excellent update, and I hope your moving went well!
Starwings1
2009-12-04 . chapter 14
AWSOME AWSOME AWSOME!
Please update I love this story!
Serenity Moon2
2009-12-01 . chapter 14
O….ouch…Harry just called Quatre a girl…though, I find it rather funny. Wonder if Quatre will find out about that comment. Well, if Duo did hear…maybe he just might find out about it, though Duo could probably do more damage with the tidbit though.

Oh my, does this mean that Trowa has magic too? And it was a memory charm that they hit “the little boy” with, wasn’t it? They erased Trowa’s memories?

Now that does bring up a good question, will Harry get to meet Hilde and Cathy?

Are we going to get to find out what Hiiro gave Dorothy as she left?
Obscure Stranger
2009-12-01 . chapter 14
Super cute!
Erroneously
2009-12-01 . chapter 14
Thanks for the update - I went back and reread the whole story. I'd forgotten how much I enjoyed the way you portray Harry and the affection he gives and receives.
Hikari Anderson
2009-11-28 . chapter 14
Wow, that was a really good chapter. Please, keep writing.
DaughterofDeath
2009-11-28 . chapter 14
add a new chapter
invisible-gurl
2009-11-28 . chapter 14
aw he's adorable XD... <3 the gundam pilots =D... great job so far... i love the storyline... i'm wondering about dumbledore though...wouldn't he notice or something? great job though and plz update soon ^^
HeavyMetal-Chic
2009-11-27 . chapter 14
This story just keeps getting better and better.
-usagi018-
2009-11-27 . chapter 14
Update! Update! Update!! XD Please?! XD till next time!
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