 ana-12. 2009-10-18 . chapter 13awesome, hope you'll continue |
 puresimplicity-xo 2009-10-17 . chapter 13 "Blair flashed back to the night where she and Chuck…reunited."
I really like the insight that their thoughts give into the reasoning behind their reunion. It's reminiscent of that earlier chapter, an intricate allusion to what is the fundamental basis of everything that has happened: their love.
"Finally, the elevator stopped and everyone let out a breath of relief."
The air actually did lift after the intensity of Chuck's thoughts. The way you italicised 'his' in "his girl" spoke so strongly of their inexorable connection.
Blair's letter is by far the most heartfelt thing you've written. The build up towards the end is so stunningly climatic that you really render me unable to express just how mesmerised I am by the passion that you evoked in it.
"P.S. I knew they’d break you!"
This line is very sentimental to me because I remember you telling me what you'd intended it to mean and it really accentuated the allure of your characters, the fact that Blair knew each and every one of them so well. It was all interconnected in that moment.
This truly is a breathtaking story and I can say unconditionally that it is and will remain my favourite. |
 puresimplicity-xo 2009-10-17 . chapter 12 It's a little strange to see them being called Mr and Mrs Humphrey. I guess regardless of what happens they'll always just be Dan, Serena, Nate, Blair and Chuck. It's like when Seth and Summer got married. She was still Summer Roberts to me.
The conversation between Blair and Pierre has such a heartfelt sincerity to it. I actually felt that I understood the feelings that both were being subject to despite the fact that this is the first appearance that Pierre makes (apart from the phonecall and the tree that is) so his character up until this point has only been touched on by Blair.
"Bart tried to keep his eyes open."
This still hasn't lost its charm the second time around.
Chuck mouthing Ryan's words is very endearing and so much like him. |
 puresimplicity-xo 2009-10-17 . chapter 11 This chapter is so heartwrenching, mostly because of how things were left further down the track.
The transitions you make between angst and humour blend so smoothly together and you really manage to capture the essence of each as required by the events. |
 puresimplicity-xo 2009-10-17 . chapter 10 “Nate, I’m flattered, but I’m just not into guys.”
There's just something so thoroughly likable about the way you craft Dan in this story. Even though the main events don't revolve around him, the role that he, Serena and their children have fits quite comfortably in the big picture.
“Blair wants me to inform you that you two are no longer on speaking terms and you are a traitorous b-i-t-c-h.”
Together they make it work.
"Then I hung up on him and threw my phone at a tree."
The offhanded comment about her phone and the tree is well placed lol!
The interaction between Nate and Blair towards the end of this chapter is of a nice balance, it reminds me of some of the scenes they had together towards the end of season 2. There was something so reminiscent about them yet they weren't who they once were. It was evocative. |
 Krazy4Spike 2009-10-02 . chapter 13OMG! I read this story in one sitting not realizing that it wasn't finished and hasn't been updated in more than a year! I can't believe that you haven't finished it! Please, for the love of God, write at least one more chapter to finish off this story. You really did a wonderful job on it, and it should be completed. |
 puresimplicity-xo 2009-09-25 . chapter 9 "He had no control over himself when he was with her. She could take his heart and smash it into a million tiny pieces without even trying."
That's the beauty of them.
“Really.” Brent said, eyeing Chuck hungrily.
Brent reminds me of another character from another show.
Said character is very endearing.
“What is he doing here, then?” Brent pressed.
Lol he totally nailed it in one go.
You capture their dynamics so well regardless of whether they're just shopping or being intimate. |
 puresimplicity-xo 2009-09-25 . chapter 8 Now I keep looking for an open line where I can use that phrase.
Hrm. I'm going to use it anyway.
"That's what she said."
:P
“That’s great Blair. You’re going to embarrass Nate so he won’t tell you he loves you.”
How ironic considering the events of season 2.
It's interesting to see things from a different perspective.
“Call me crazy, but why don’t you just tell him how you feel?” Dan asked.
That's such a Chuck thing to say.
In fact, he did say "Call me crazy".
“Good call, S. Better make it three.”
-chortles-
“Move your **, Archibald. I’m not telling you again.”
Looks like she can tell him what to do, girlfriend or no girlfriend.
Heh. :) |
 puresimplicity-xo 2009-09-25 . chapter 7 Okay I logged out especially for this.
Generally people log in to review; I had to log out lol.
The Dan humour shines yet again.
They're like nice little interludes inbetween the legendary duo which I need not name.
"Chuck, having more experience in situations similar to this immediately ran to the bathroom, closing the door behind him."
Stealthy Chuck.
It was amusing then, still amusing now.
"She then raised her right hand in the air and gave herself a hi-five."
Lol! She would wouldn't she.
“That’s what she said.” Nate muttered in Blair’s ear.
...
OH MY GOSH. I ACTUALLY GET THIS NOW.
-epiphany-
I hadn't come across the reference the first time I read it. |
 ggxoxo 2009-09-08 . chapter 13 i have read this fic twice already...its simply amazing...plz continue the story...or write a sequel...plz plz plz |
 sunshineydays. 2009-08-21 . chapter 12i love this! update soon! |
 JYLlian 2009-06-13 . chapter 13OH. MY. GOSH. I can't believe you just left it like that. This is so so amazing! I might not be able to sleep if you won't update it. Haha. :)) PLEASE, PLEASE UPDATE SOON! |
 cherrysugar 2009-06-10 . chapter 13please update soon... :) |
 CB 2009-05-08 . chapter 13 I love this story, its so intense!! Please update soon, i hope this isnt the end?? |
 puresimplicity-xo 2009-04-20 . chapter 6 I love this chapter very much for obvious reasons.
:D
Seven years sure is a long time.
The length of time apart only serves to increase the need for sexual fulfillment between these two and this chapter definitely satiated that!
I know.
I like the way his response remained the same and it worked with what she was saying.
The tranquility following their reunion was done nicely.
Chuck being inconspicuous is amusing.
Chuck Bass is not one for inconspicuity, from his fashion to his mannerisms. |