Now, that one was horrible. I'm still crying and I don't like you that much. Great job on your story. I liked the whole setting in Ireland and the world you built. Great OC's too. Good job.
aww that was so sad! And don't worry about the accents, I always hear irish accents in my head no matter what story I read so it doesn't matter if they are written I guess is what I'm trying to say :)