 Whiteling 2009-07-14 . chapter 34Whatever ye sends forth comes back to thee times three. Shame those two never learned that. Though the younger kid didn't have to die like his old man. :( |
 Whiteling 2009-07-14 . chapter 27Sorry, but Farla and Japyros were morons. If they really loved each other they would've waited not hurt everyone with their lie or begin and affair in the first place. |
 sayain girl Gege 2004-07-27 . chapter 112 I'm so happy! I'm finaly done reading this story, so I can now give you my review... well actually I finnished it last night at 3am! you can see why I didn't review it then so I'm doing this review today at... 2am, trust me it's an improvement.Now before I pass out from lack of sleep I just have one thing to say... 5 out of 5! I completly loved this story from begining to end it was worth having to read 112 chapters to see what happend. The one thing I didn't like about this story was the reason why Frieza can't love anyone, that old hag Queen Frost got what she deserved, programing a person to do what you want them to do is sick, taking away their ability to show compassion and love, (starts crying) it's just not right!How could someone do that!...how...(whipes away tears) I feel a little better now that I got to say that, anyway I'm now starting to read Hope Never Dies so please get a move on with writting it.
p.s. Sawnya I'm sorry for the out burst I become a little emotional at this time of the day..night..no...morning...uhh now I'm confused. |
 cheekychick662 2004-07-15 . chapter 1 Hi. My name is Claire.
I really loved this story because my two favourite characters are Zarbon and Chestra. I like how they got together. I wasn't expecting her to be the daughter of Freiza that was a shock. Anyway I think someone should write a sequel about Chestra finding out that Freiza is her father. I think that would be good. I was sort of dissapointed she didn't find out in this story.
Looking forward to your reply.
cheekychick662@hotmail.com |
 Anouk 2004-03-15 . chapter 112 So col! |
 Crecy 2003-06-23 . chapter 112 Me: Amazing. That story was incredible. It took me near 2 weeks to finish it (Not to mention my limited computer time) But I did it! That was so kewl! Go tayla!
Annoymous person:Tayla and Bendros sitting in a tree!
Me: Sounds about right. ^_^ Well, Gooden boden fro noy! |
 Crecy 2003-06-20 . chapter 112Asome story! I haven't finished it yet. I'm only on Chapter 83, but I wanted to put you on my fav authors list. k? Well, I'm gonna go read more chappies. bye! ^_^ |
 damnaccount 2003-05-09 . chapter 112yay! the internet is fixed, i could log on! ... ahem. yes, review... : holy geezem crap! that was very very very very very very very very very very very very LONG. and the chapters were huge. i loved it tho, u are extremely creative, and can put up with keyboards and computers better than i can. i also liiked the little extras at the end, a good laugh. it took me just about 2 whole weeks to read this and one of them was my spring break. well worth the time though, i wish that i had found this earlier to be there with u when u had ben writing this. i just read Chelstra, and i throughly enjoyed the result of ginyu and bailair's bet. i forgot to mention it in the review for that story, sry. anywho LOL LOL LOL LOL! ah, that was beautiful, and freezey was acting like a wonderfully overprotective father. yay! anywho, back to this story. i loved this story, i simply can't comment on all of the things in it, there were too many. oh, but i liked it a lot! very satisfying. i'm content. yay!
~sam~ |
 Jyuu 2002-08-16 . chapter 112Ah! I finally got around to reading the end! I have one thing to say, very calmly.
Wow.
Okay, I lied. Here's what I really want to say:
WOWOWOWOWOWOWOWOW THIS IS THE GREATEST FANFIC EVER!!!!!!! OOOMYGOSH THIS IS SOOO COOOL ANNDDD....
::goes back into comprehensible mode:: This is truly a great fic! I feel like I know every character and I'm watching as this all happens! You really are a great author! You should continue this forever (or as long as possible ^^;), I don't care if it seems repetitive! I'll keep reading this!!
Wow, I just noticed I wrote a decent review. See what you made me do?! You made me write a good review, it's such a great fic! ^-^
~Jyuuhachipeach the Gerudo Oddess~ |
 PTLiz 2002-07-24 . chapter 112I have followed this story from the begining and it is the one that i am always looking forward ot reading. if only it could become an actual anime television series! anyways i loved this entire fic and i can't wait for the sequel. gooden boden fro noy! |
 Cirono Night 2002-07-16 . chapter 112Um... What exactly is my wife's name? :) You never told me it. :( |
 karisah 2002-07-15 . chapter 112Hey there Sawnya!
I finished your Chestra story a few days ago, and when I realized that this story was sitting there, unread by me, I just had to read it! And after finishing it, only one word comes to mind:
Wow.
I have never read a story that's as good as this one. Every character, from Alora to Kekron to Tayla, was wonderfully planned out and believeable. The conflicts and resolutions between characters - particularly Gorna, Rojal and Tayla - were fitting with the story, and Cletos' heartbreak and the repercussions gave the story a fresh twist. I am truly looking forward to the next installment of Tayla's story, and you can bet that I'll read every last word of it!
Peace, love and gooden boden fro noy,
karisah, WCM |
 BC1 2002-06-08 . chapter 109Dear Sawnya,
I love the DBZ story Tayla of Astoria. I can't wait for the next part of it to be put up. I love it! I would love for Caline to go home with the Astorians.
Your #1 fan,
BC |
 Jyuu 2002-06-08 . chapter 109Yay for Caline!! Go Tayla and Bendros!!! |
 badgerwolf 2002-06-04 . chapter 109 (wild cheers of delight) yeah! good for caline! nice way to handle it! cool chapter, i like. oh, but like i said last time...don't forget that traitorous twit dedron.... |