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| Reita 2008-07-25 ch 23, anon. | abuseheyy! you also play the world ends with you game? me too! XDD the best game eva! the world ends with you r.o.c.k! neku the bestt! XDD hahahaha! |
| Reita 2008-07-25 ch 23, anon. | abusenext chapter please! XD the story become more and more exciting! XDD hahaha... suree! XDD untill the store bankcrupt! XPP i can eat 10 plates of salmon sashimi at once,hahahaha... XDD btw, do you have friendster?? |
| Sparky09 2008-07-25 ch 23,  | abuseMwahaha, I read the whole thing in one day, now for the other story. |
| xX-Sapphire-Articuno-Xx 2008-07-24 ch 23, | abuseI definately remember this part! in the Movie, May thinks Manaphy ran away because of the way she had been treating him, so does everyone else. Tips: when they are in the sub, Brendan should show concern for May, cause that's kinda what happens in the movie (Ash shwos concern for May) I finally realise what an exelent idea you had for this story! Cause the actual movie has alot of advanceshipping moments in it, to change it to Hoennshipping? this is gonna be good... Sapphire x |
| Brenediction 2008-07-21 ch 23, | abuseNice chapter,the suspense is killing me since i never actually saw the entire movie. I wanna watch the full movie but I dont wanna spoil the story. Anyways Im looking forward to your next updates. |
| LethoBion 2008-07-20 ch 23, | abuseHAPPY BIRTHDAY! Friendly drop-in to remind you that no one should be embarrassed about having too many candles on their cakes... Though getting your eyebrows on fire would be a bit too much.(just joking. lol) Nice dramatic effect on the bandanna. I hope you update soon, and i'll be waiting to give you birthday beats when you're late... no pressure. ( how many should I give you if you ARE late?) Anyways, again, nice writing. keep it up!! |
| the shadow of hell 2008-07-20 ch 23, | abuseoh yes we should do that but the Japanese already made a manga about brendan and may with tons of blood ^_^ and love as well. bah I hate Drew I wish that turd dies. (yes his hair does look like poop.) nice chapter btw I hope Brendan catch Kyorgre and use Ice beam to freeze Drew. ^_^ |
| RubyxSapphire 2008-07-20 ch 23, | abuse?what kind of story?...dunno...if your going to write one chose at random...I guess... kind of sad no hoenn shipping moments... |
| Jarkes 2008-07-20 ch 23, anon. | abuseAwesome chapter. |
| grammaguy 2008-07-20 ch 23, | abuseNew chapter, drilled through, corrected by me, and posted later the same day. By you, that is. A few questions come to mind - what's THE WORLD ENDS WITH YOU? Never heard of it. I guess I'll look it up on Wikipedia or something... How did they fit a sub in the boat? I think that's stupid. And the story? Oh, yes, I hope Hoennshipping will be setting in soon... or else! Moahhahahhahahaahahaahhahahha... Signing off, grammaguy |
| RubyxSapphire 2008-07-18 ch 22, | abuse/s/4405405/1/ Plz read it! It is my first story! |
| sorrowful tainted ayamari 2008-07-14 ch 22, | abuseSo sad. But I loved it! |
| LethoBion 2008-07-13 ch 22, | abuseJust a friendly reminder that your sleeves are on fire. you know, that explosion was pretty quiet. I hope the torch didn't wreck anything, 'couse I got impatient and blew it up a bit early. ooh, the silent hallway technique!! Classic romance, if I might say so. I miss you too. (Despite the fact that DID rig the torch.) anyways, I would have preferred more ...intensity in May's sorrow and Brendan's comforting. But, really, you did a great job. I hope you'll update soon. i'll be looking forward to it. |
| bigheadrew 2008-07-12 ch 22, | abuseThat chapter was sad, but, all things aside that was a good chapter i hope you can update soon. Keep it up! |
| Jarkes 2008-07-12 ch 22, anon. | abuseSo sad. |