NO!
I WANT MORE!1
xD
Oh GOD!
My imagination's running askew with images of what if's...
xD
KYA!
Can you possibly find a moment in your busy and important life and write a part where uh... WHERE KAIBA DIDN'T LET 'IM GO?!?!
Omigod!
xDD

Hm...I really like this one. It displays Seto as a obsessive and unrestrained "antagonist". It was really interesting to read about his personality this way, it's like the outcome of numerous years of stress, quiet hardships, stoic-ness, and the crazy allure of the defiance Joey holds. Very dark and angsty. I'd say...if there was a Physcological genre, this would be a perfect fit.

I love the one-shot, very unique characterization.

Best wishes for your future writing!

Holy shit haha! Can you say "rape time"? Because I can =D
Erm, I mean D= Yes. Sad smiley. Phooey. Bad Kaiba, bad!

I like Dark!Seto and his obsession though. Because he is a VERY obsessive man O_o There probably are more Blue Eyes White Dragon statues than hair on his body.

I totally liked how Jounouchi DID NOT like Kaiba back. Very realistic. Kudos for that!

GP

Omg Seto Kaiba is way scary
in this story i feel ever so
sorry for poor Katsuya.
Still found it interesting to
read. x Ainsel x

Dark Seto and scared Jounouchi is the best ^_^

Poor Jounouchi =/ I would freak out if somebody tried to do that to me as well.

THis was beutifully written, I'm adding it to my Faves

Rene

WOW! Amazing!
AS usually you portrayed the characters very good :)

It's kinda creepy and I love it! XD I love this type of eerieness. lol

OMG! This was awesome! I just love the way Kaiba want to dominate over Jou XD really good work :D

...I really shouldn't be happy about this. Then again, I just fully admitted to myself that one of my favorite aspects of this pairing is its darkness...XD Considering I'm a cheerful sort, it's interesting that that's what I like here.

This is so disturbing... I really don't like Seto that way...

But anyway, it was a very good oneshot and I enjoyed reading it despite... well the way Seto is...

It would be so good if you can write a sequel. A sequel where Seto, through his sick stalcking, will begin to realize that he actually love Jou. And where Jou will begin to develop feelings for Seto and will begin dominate him (a JouxSeto fic will be so good, even if at the beginning it will be maybe SetoxJou)^^'

Anyway good luck for your next puppyshipping writing!

This is impressively In Character considering the pairing. I like how Jou doesn't just give in and turn into a lovesick puppy (no pun intended) but is as scared as most people would be, facing someone like that. Really nice.

Wow, you are FAST!! ^-^
I was really surprised (in a good way, of course!!), when I saw you posted another story already! And it's SetoxJou again, yay!!
Well, this is *definitely* very dark fic.. it's different from Another drink for sure. I must admit, even though I'm not really a big fan of dark fics (because I always feel so down after reading them...sigh), I liked this one very much. Seto is truly scary here, but also very attractive.. in some dark way. His obsession with Jou is so... I don't know, real? Like, I can imagine it happen...
Anyway, I'm babbling, what I wanted so say, great job and... heh, when is the next story coming? ^-^
Take care!!
And happy Easter!!
K.

Seto Kaiba IS slightly deranged - a great way of showing it. I throughly enjoyed the strong language and imagery. And Puppyshipping is always something nice to read before crashing for the night. Good job.

~ Val

Well, I don't support yaoi and I probably never will, but I do like angst! And you've done pretty good job with it! Why don't you make another story, but this time with Joey being the bad guy? It will be quite different, thus quite more intriguing!

I love this! Look at me, I'm reviewing a fanfic for the first time in years!
I love this dark, sadistic take, and I love that Jou was such a fighter.
Apparently I love a lot of things. Hee.