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| Egotist Calamity 2008-05-03 ch 1, | abuseMake them longer! I like your "N/S talking in bed after sex". lol +fav |
| abygasm 2008-05-01 ch 1, | abusei love it. i think, in a way, nakago did love soi. |
| SultryGamer 2008-04-17 ch 1, | abuseGreat Story! I loved totally loved it! The scenes between these two are really bittersweet since knowing how they end up and all, you really do know how to write a love scence by the way, you could feel the longing and hopefullness in Soi as she truely does love Nakago and I belive that he did love her too, but was too afraid to voice it. And when he kisses her at the end, gosh it just broke my heart. Anyway great story, oh I already said that but I mean it was just so good I thought that it deserved another lol! Oh and please write another one, I really cannot get enough of these two, sadly not too many people write their stories with this pairing, and it is my most favortie! Thanks again. |
| Paws-chan 2008-04-05 ch 1, | abuseThis was just so sweet! You really captured both characters well! I love the end for it! |
| Hedonistic Opportunist 2008-03-19 ch 1, | abuseI thought I would finally log in and, even though, I am tired beyond comprehension and, perhaps, will sound very *confused* - muddled -- to you...I just had to review. What I really love about your fics, regardless of show, character and pairing, is that they have quality. You don't just pile words together prettily or write for the heck of it: your drabbles have a theme and, hell, are thought-provoking. I think, for example, most authors would have needed another thousand words to pinpoint how complex the Nakago/Soi relationship is, but you nailed it. I loved the hints of caring that Nakago shows here and, still, how you managed to keep him perfectly IC. Love the contradictions as well: his passion and nonchalance, the caring and not-caring, and the intimacy, as well as non-intimacy of their relationship. Your writing is so wonderfully descriptive, in spite of the length. Usually, when I come across drabbles, the writing is either choppy or characterised by run on sentences, but yours just flows. I think the smut was tastefully handled; I did not feel the desire to skip it because it was sensual. I know I am not making any sense, what with reviewing this at a very unholy hour in the morning. However, it is a shame that such a lovely piece of work should not receive any comments at all. |