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| darkflame666 2008-05-25 ch 1,  | abuseah...i love the ending! "be quiet. i will be God." :D great job (misa's pretty annoying here) |
| GoneBonkers 2008-05-08 ch 1, | abuseHaha I found this funny :] Good job! I liked it. |
| This is the Matrix 2008-04-30 ch 1, | abuseThe thing is, I think that's exactly how Light would act during sex. Very overpowering... Loved the last bit dialogue. Definitely Light-esque. A+ |
| MilkshakePunch 2008-04-29 ch 1, anon. | abuse*applause* That was very in character, and very well written. |
| missashlee28 2008-04-13 ch 1, | abuseOh my, how you have pleased me. What an absolutely perfect fic. Truly. So wonderfully in character, and the ending is just...well, I have no words. Just, please, keep writing. You have fantastic talent, I say. |
| MistariaPotter 2008-03-28 ch 1, | abusei wish light actually loved misa... |
| MESHIRU/MICHELLE 2008-03-28 ch 1, anon. | abuseOMFG! I loved it! I could hear their voices in my head and pictured the whole scenario too! It's easy for girls to picture that stuff you know! (BTW, I hope that you're not offended if I think you're a girl!) *Lets out a scream* Okay... I'm better now! xD *pants* PHEW! You're really amazing! I could never write half as good as you, and I've got roleplay smut to do this weekend with a friend of mine who's totally into the same shit! It's about time that someone writes GOOD smut that's actually up to date for once! I read it on the 28th of March of course, and I AM so glad that I'm not the only pervert around! xD *lol* My heart's still pounding from reading this lemon! I DEFINITELY APPROVE! Keep it up, YOU'RE WICKED GOOD AT WRITING! >:D P.S. Sorry for the long review! REPLY when you can! x3 LATER! |
| SakuBunny 2008-03-22 ch 1, | abuseoh my that was awesome! hehehe she really did to shut up.. it was even irritating me! hah oh well.. light new how to fix it ;D keep writing cuz you are awesome!! |
| KissKISSxXxBangBANG 2008-03-22 ch 1, | abuseWow! Just plain wow! I loved this! |
| Sirena-Lune 2008-03-20 ch 1, | abusePoor Misa. All she wants is a "li'l bit o' luv". Poor Light. All he wants is for Misa to SHUT THE FUCK UP. I think you did wonders with Light's personality. He's perfectly in character; an asshole, just like I like 'im. 8D |
| Fantabulous 2008-03-19 ch 1, anon. | abuseHaha, Misa does NOT know how to shut up. EVER. Short, but very, very good. :] |
| Kane Shi Megami 2008-03-19 ch 1, | abuseWow did it get 20 degrees hotter in here just now? *pants* I think I read this on LJ but I just couldn't resist reading it again *grins* Thanks for this. :) KSM |