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| Da One Me to Pwn You All 2008-05-03 ch 1,  | abuseAw, that was really cute. Your writing is very deep. I like it! |
| LadyAnalyn 2008-03-21 ch 1, | abuseHow sweet, I liked it. Very romantic. And seeing how I live in a place that just snowed today (the second day of spring no less) I think you did great with the snow. Though, I'm not fond of the evil white stuff, I thought I was back when I lived in Southern California but after two years in the Pacific Northwest...nope, snow is horribly cold and icky. However, I still liked the story. |
| Grace Veronica 2008-03-21 ch 1, | abuseThis was absolutely fantastic! I read it three times. *laughs* I thought it was really, really well done. Very poetic, very beautiful. And don't feel pretentious (though that is a fantastic word). I so love writing all snow-y scenes, but I've never seen the snow except once. *laughs* At least you're not freezing to death. Anyway, this is so beautiful. Love Grace |
| hydraspit 2008-03-20 ch 1, | abuseThis is beautiful! The images are bright and vibrant. Very well written. |
| justification to wormtail 2008-03-20 ch 1, anon. | abuseThat was written beautifully! Amazing job! =D |
| crazy4smiley67 2008-03-19 ch 1, | abuseOh god beautiful! |
| streakedrainwolf 2008-03-19 ch 1, | abuseThat was cute! Loved it so much! ~streak |
| endeavor 2008-03-19 ch 1, | abusewow, i really liked this. good job. and you got the snow right. i love snow- its snowing outside now (i live in upstate ny) but seriously though- you've never experienced snow before? i'm sorry, but that just seems strange to me; i can't imagine never making a snowman, having a snowball fight, ect. but i guess it must be nice to live in the caribbean, i'm knida jelous of you for that... anyways the only thing i wanted to say about the snow is that if sirius was warm the snow would probably only stay white for a few seconds then melt and leave a spot of shimmery wetness but if he was cold then it would stay longer. but seriously, great job on this; you're awesome! |
| gryffindor 2008-03-19 ch 1, anon. | abusedon't worry, it's not pretentious at all. I really liked it. |
| PaddyWaddy 2008-03-19 ch 1, | abuseIt was so pretty and perfect and wowwoowowow (fans self with invisible fan* |