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| Bookflower 2008-04-18 ch 4,  | abuseI loved it! The interaction between Neal and Dom was excellent! Please do update... |
| Uncertian Destiny 2008-04-16 ch 1, | abusegreat story, i cant wait to see how long it takes kel to find out !! please update soon!! |
| wAstxd1sYmPhOny 2008-04-16 ch 4, | abuseVery funny! I can't wait for more! I love how you're staying on the topic of the book, while still adding romance and stuff in. Well done!! wAstxd x |
| Ranger's Only Girl 2008-04-16 ch 4, | abuseI can't wait to see what happens next! Great job! |
| Aly-Of-Tortall13 2008-04-15 ch 4, | abuseThe tortallan libary! Complete with Dewey decimal system! THat is hilarious! |
| littlefreeeagle 2008-04-15 ch 4, | abusehey, its me again! sorry i couldnt review for the last chapter, i was just so busy with homework and stuff. :( ok, well i thought that both chapters were brilliant! keep up the awesome work, and ill try to review as much as i can! |
| PuppyBekaCooper 2008-04-15 ch 4, | abuseheh heh, i'm glad one of Dom's pranks had, dare i say, lasting effects... Liz |
| The-New-Nightingale 2008-04-15 ch 4, | abuseGood chapter. I like the idea of Neal having his library privilages revoked. I can't wait to see what happens when Kel arrives back in Corus. |
| xxTunstall Chickxx 2008-04-14 ch 4, | abuseHehe library cards... genius! Pure and utter! Good job, can't wait to read more on what happens next... Keep Writing (it was really good), xxTunstall Chickxx |
| Proud to be an X-Nerd 2008-04-14 ch 4, | abuseI really liked that chapter... And it was SO much longer!! -sighs- Plus the bit with Dom and Neal was just halarious. I can't wait to see how you develop Dom and Kel in any relationship you put them in together. See you next chapter! |
| DragonEyesBaraboo 2008-04-14 ch 1, | abusei like it. it's really original, and i think it could be really funny. I must ask though, would they really be so flippant/scornful about their scanran adventures? if you need a beta, i'd be willing to do it. just let me know. keep writing! |
| Proud to be an X-Nerd 2008-04-05 ch 3, | abuseThanks! I'm glad that I could help. :D And I totally love this chapter, so don't go speaking ill of it!! I think it was a much needed glimps into what Neal is going through. Oh! I just thought of something I'd wanted to ask you... At some point in the story, are you going to convert it completely to 'story mode' and just have the story through Neal's eyes, or are you going to keep having it from his point of veiw as he's writing the book? Reading over that I wonder, "Did that make ANY sense to you?" Catch ya later! X-Nerd |
| The-New-Nightingale 2008-04-05 ch 3, | abuseI absolutely love this story. You've captured the character of Neal perfectly and seeing the story of Kel from his point of view through his own literary work promises to be increadible. I also like the way you're not just re-telling the Protector of the Small series, there's actually a seperate story line running simultaneously which gives your work an extra dimension. Great job. I hope you update soon. |
| Beaux717 2008-04-04 ch 3, | abuseI just wanted to say that i loved how you included the true complications of writing... prob some of your own experiences... but over all i love the style of your writing and am eagar to read more... I am esp. excited to see what Kel's reaction to Neals writing a story about her is! |
| xxTunstall Chickxx 2008-04-03 ch 3, | abuseGreat chapter, it was really good so don't worry. It was well in character, the writing that is. When I read the piece about Kel it definitely seemed like something Neal would write. Congrats and update soon! Keep Writing, xxTunstall Chickxx |