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| EvaFlack001 2008-06-04 ch 11,  | abuseAm at work and reading over stuff I haven't read already! Loved the last part. I was thinking that I'd love if Flack was working in my company, even if I just can't see him as a banker. Wow. He's hot. And the other part that sticks out is Gus asking if they're going to go south. Pure genius! |
| sparkyCSI 2008-03-19 ch 11, | abuseI love it and you've inspired my muse to have a go! |
| Aphina 2008-03-19 ch 11, | abuseLMao you did make me havea good alauhg about this, I think I'd be the same as Gus. I think you did fab with this challenge, you amde me want to do it myself, in fact i think I'l giv eit a go. |
| Aphina 2008-03-19 ch 10, | abuselol I lvoed this cahapter, it made me grin it was so light and funy esp after the day they'd had, you could really get a sense of what was happening in the scene. |
| Aphina 2008-03-19 ch 9, | abuseI really felt for him in this chapter, the whole stop being a cop thing made me amile and you have continuity. |
| Aphina 2008-03-19 ch 8, | abuseI loved this chapter because I could just see it perfcectly in my minds eye and it made me giggle. |
| Aphina 2008-03-19 ch 7, | abuseLLMAO this really made me smile! Seriously I love the diversity you have here! |
| Aphina 2008-03-19 ch 6, | abuseI really liked this chapter, beause it shows the strength of their relationship as partners, I love the pre realtisonhip angst lol (its not really angst) |
| Aphina 2008-03-19 ch 5, | abuseDanny is a bad man! That's not fair. I liked this it was somewhat funny, but not at the same time. i can't relaly describe it lol. |
| Aphina 2008-03-19 ch 4, | abuseThis is realy swee, you capture \flack's fatherly side and it remally is fab to see the different side to him in your story. |
| Aphina 2008-03-19 ch 3, | abuseI really felt for him in this chapter. I love the passion and the history you out in to this. You make it truly emotive! |
| Aphina 2008-03-19 ch 2, | abuseLMAO I can so see Gus doing that, i lovethese little drabbles, I can't await to see what else you have doe. |
| foxdvd 2008-03-19 ch 11, | abuseVery nicely done, Ms M! Wish I'd heard of this challenge before... see what "shade" my "three-tries" muse comes up with... there's always room for "other Flacks" in there, n'est ce pas? ;) |
| Brown eyed Girl 75 2008-03-19 ch 11, | abuseOh My God! So good. Love the thought process ya got. Keep up the great work. I adore Gus and Flack. |