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sparkyCSI
2008-03-19
ch 11,
abuseI love it and you've inspired my muse to have a go!
Aphina
2008-03-19
ch 11,
abuseLMao you did make me havea good alauhg about this, I think I'd be the same as Gus. I think you did fab with this challenge, you amde me want to do it myself, in fact i think I'l giv eit a go.
Aphina
2008-03-19
ch 10,
abuselol I lvoed this cahapter, it made me grin it was so light and funy esp after the day they'd had, you could really get a sense of what was happening in the scene.
Aphina
2008-03-19
ch 9,
abuseI really felt for him in this chapter, the whole stop being a cop thing made me amile and you have continuity.
Aphina
2008-03-19
ch 8,
abuseI loved this chapter because I could just see it perfcectly in my minds eye and it made me giggle.
Aphina
2008-03-19
ch 7,
abuseLLMAO this really made me smile! Seriously I love the diversity you have here!
Aphina
2008-03-19
ch 6,
abuseI really liked this chapter, beause it shows the strength of their relationship as partners, I love the pre realtisonhip angst lol (its not really angst)
Aphina
2008-03-19
ch 5,
abuseDanny is a bad man! That's not fair. I liked this it was somewhat funny, but not at the same time. i can't relaly describe it lol.
Aphina
2008-03-19
ch 4,
abuseThis is realy swee, you capture \flack's fatherly side and it remally is fab to see the different side to him in your story.
Aphina
2008-03-19
ch 3,
abuseI really felt for him in this chapter. I love the passion and the history you out in to this. You make it truly emotive!
Aphina
2008-03-19
ch 2,
abuseLMAO I can so see Gus doing that, i lovethese little drabbles, I can't await to see what else you have doe.
foxdvd
2008-03-19
ch 11,
abuseVery nicely done, Ms M!
Wish I'd heard of this challenge before... see what "shade" my "three-tries" muse comes up with... there's always room for "other Flacks" in there, n'est ce pas?
;)
Brown eyed Girl 75
2008-03-19
ch 11,
abuseOh My God! So good. Love the thought process ya got. Keep up the great work. I adore Gus and Flack.
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