aww adorable. :)
Quite cheesy at the ened but I didn't mind. :p
Great job!

love the story
especially the "if u want me, come get me"
ahh
edward all the way

That was awesome. :bd I was listening to ALL I WANTED WAS YOU by PARAMORE while I was reading this whole thing. It was amazing. I love every moment of it, including the infinitely annoying Lauren and Jess. LOVE IT.

is this the last chap? or are u gonna have an epilogue?

This Was AWESOME !! I Loved The Movie and Also Loved How You Told It In Twilight Perspective !! Good Job !!

Kim

AW! This was adorable! :D

Aw, this was the sweetest story I have ever read!
Go Bella! Goodbye Lauren. :D
You might want to change "too" to "to" in chp. 8. Otherwise, fab work!

That was really sweet though i feel bad for Jacob. I absolutly love that move and i think you did a great job of adapting it to Twilight. :)
l8r g8r
~high~off~skittles~XP~

Ooh I wanna slap Lauren!
btw, that story was amazing!

Oh my god this story is so cute! :) I can't wait for more. You are such a good writer.

OME this is AMAZING!! I loved this! I absolutally love this! is that all?! urg! haha, the speach made me cry! gosh, i'm such a sap...

Your awesome at writing and i though tis was AWESOME!!

aw
it's adorable

i love ur atory... its so cute :)

That was so cute! i had tears in my eyes! lol! great story can't wait for next chappy!
x.x.

Peace, Love, Cullens

Trina Cullen

I LOVE THIS STORY!IT IS REALLY,REALLY,REALLY,REALLY,REALLY,
REALLY GOOD!