Beautiful.

*sigh* Beautifully tragic.
I love the symbolism. (Ex: Sasuke as a pure angel with torn wings.) It made this sound like poetry.

I like how they both went together. I love it when the lovers lives end at the same time; better than having one die & the other live on.

~The Critic, Zoa

Wow, that was amazing. It was really deep, yet you kept the characters in their personas. =D

The words flowed so easily, too. Like you didn't even think about them, they just came to you and you wrote them down before you forgot them.

Excellent job. =D

ohh love it!! i especially loved how you compared sasuke to an angel!!