freakin' awesome long-shot! XD

Huh, I first read this story from a self-imposed challenge. I had no pairings in the FFX fandom that I really liked, but after reading this I can easily say that Seymore/Tidus has made my favorites list. Thank you so much for making a pairing I was slightly scared of work so well.

~Amaya

I liked this it was different and i love this pairing (Though i dont think there's enough of it out there) annyway i really enjoyed this!

Yay another Tidus/Seymour, I love that pairing. The story was very good, though a little confusing at times, but most of it became clearer the more you read. Though you never did explain how he met everyone, but even without that it was still very good.

Yay another SeymourxTidus :)

First off I must say this was a confusing piece of work. Too many things were left in the dark or unclear in my opinion. The beginning especially shouldn't be that unclear as it makes it harder to graps the story itself. I had to reread it many times and I admit I still have trouble with it.

Tidus' connection and past with Seymour, the Al Bhed and even his relation to Lulu and Lady Ginnem were truly too unclear. How did Seymour and him meet and become lovers? How does he know the Al Bhed and the language? How did he become a guardian?

Providing the translator for the Al Bhed was very much appreciated though I admit I hated copying and pasting when I just wanted to read on :)

The ending seemed a bit rushed, but it's alright. The story was very long, but I think if it weren't a one-shot, it could have gone on longer, and explained many of the things I've already mentioned.

As always, I loved they way you portrayed the pairing. There's just something about the way you write Seymour that makes me squeal. "-- where you are now, in my arms, shortly to be in my bed." I melted when I read that :D

Thanks for a nother great piece of SeymourxTidus luv!