This is so well written, the way you get into the character is amazing.

I love Liberty Bell's point of view.

Please update, because this is too good for you not to write some more.

-Joanne S.

Good pov, although Juno wouldn't go home the same day she delivered, like this implies: "I sat there and was really really really confused until we went home. When we went home, Paulie came with us. I think that made Juno real happy."

Wow, I really liked this, it would be great if it was continued... I'd like to read your take on Paulie after Juno gave birth, and other characters too.

GREAT characterization. keep on writing

Aw! Liberty Bell's character is too cute!

aw that was adorable!
:)
and the first chapter was
pretty cool too.
cant wait to read the rest!
Keep writing!

-LiZ-

That's great!I hope you write more, because these two are really good!

Aww...so cute...I love LB. And her name's really cool.

Yay, that was really really good.

I just finished watching that movie (for the second time in the last two days) and I still absolutely love it.

Haha! I love the ending! That was so great! I saw the movie last night so decided to check out this fandom and was kinda disappointed actually. Most of the stories are really poorly written and have multiple grammar/ spelling issues, but this story is great! Thanks for writing a good story for this fandom!

Good job! I think that you got Bleeker's personality perfect. I like the insecurity that resides under the cool guy.

cute! you did a nice job with his character too.

I love it! I love this movie and bleeker! I think you did a really good job!!

I love this movie! very cute :)