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Ruingaraf
2009-08-18 . chapter 28
Ah, I love all of these! Well-written poetry is such a treat to read. Overall, very good. Some of my favorites...

Alchemist killer
He who threw his name aside
Vengeance in God's name

Allow no burdens
You have to make your own way
Never surrender

Rippling muscles
"Behold the Armstrong beauty!"
Sparkles strike me blind

Troubled path ahead
Call for me, and I’ll be there
Whenever you stray

Imitation Gate
I erase all the failures
My stomach, the void

In the beginning
I thought I had planned enough
I failed in the end
xfacexthisx
2008-07-29 . chapter 25
Guess who's FINALLY reviewing these??!!
Yeah, me!
Hahah.

Anyways, awesome haiku, as usual.
My favorite for this grouping has to be the last one.
foreverforgotten5
2008-06-30 . chapter 25
So Cool! I love these. They're so good! Keep going! X3
xfacexthisx
2008-06-19 . chapter 24
And again: Awesome job! =)
My favorite is probably the last one:

I had the chance once
Everything was in my grasp
I couldn't do it

It's so sad, but good.
xfacexthisx
2008-06-19 . chapter 23
Awesome job! ^_^
I couldn't pick a favorite though. =/
xfacexthisx
2008-06-19 . chapter 22
Great job once again! ^_^
My favorite for this chapter:

So, you want respect?
Well then, my dear alchemist
Grow up and earn it

Hehe. =] That amused me.
xfacexthisx
2008-06-19 . chapter 21
I like these. I think I have two favorites:

Acting out of love
It was an unhealthy wish
You must forgive us

and:

How could you do that?
I thought I taught you better
You two are expelled

The first one I like just because. End of story. The second one made me giggle with the humor of it. =)
xfacexthisx
2008-06-19 . chapter 20
Great haiku, though I am once again at a loss as to my favorite in this chapter. Well, good job anyways. ^_^
xfacexthisx
2008-06-19 . chapter 19
I love the Mustang haiku in this chapter! They're really good. Especially this one:

My young alchemist
I'm not here to be your friend
"That is an order"

It's even got a hint of humor to it. =)
xfacexthisx
2008-06-19 . chapter 18
Great job on all of these! I don't know which one is my favorite in this chapter though... =/
Flitter~Flutter
2008-06-14 . chapter 24
You did a Majhal/Karin one?! Yippe!
(Although I really don't like those two, as Majhal's a freak and Karin's a jellyfish, I've always thought they are never paid enough attention so it was cool you did one for them!) =)
Good job! Looking forward to more haiku!
deideidei
2008-06-11 . chapter 1
I like Al's Haiku A lot!
Flitter~Flutter
2008-06-09 . chapter 22
These were sweet! Write more! pwetty-pwease?
Could you do more with Nina? Or maybe one with Tucker (though I hate his guts?) Or some for Barry the Chopper? Oh, heck, even Karin and Majhal though they weren't really very important characters? Pwease?
Ah heck, your haiku are too cool for words...
Flitter~Flutter
2008-06-09 . chapter 2
These are awesome!
Some of them make me laugh, some of them are sad, some of them are just random, but all of them are cool.
I have never really been able to grasp the art of haiku, sadly...
"The artistic alchemy"...wow...=)

Really more amazing if you wrote them at 4:30 in the morning by cellphone light...
I've never really grasped the art of cellphones either...
SpanishPirate
2008-06-09 . chapter 22
I LOVE THESE!
much love to these haiku =D
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