 Ruingaraf 2009-08-18 . chapter 28Ah, I love all of these! Well-written poetry is such a treat to read. Overall, very good. Some of my favorites...
Alchemist killer
He who threw his name aside
Vengeance in God's name
Allow no burdens
You have to make your own way
Never surrender
Rippling muscles
"Behold the Armstrong beauty!"
Sparkles strike me blind
Troubled path ahead
Call for me, and I’ll be there
Whenever you stray
Imitation Gate
I erase all the failures
My stomach, the void
In the beginning
I thought I had planned enough
I failed in the end |
 xfacexthisx 2008-07-29 . chapter 25Guess who's FINALLY reviewing these??!!
Yeah, me!
Hahah.
Anyways, awesome haiku, as usual.
My favorite for this grouping has to be the last one. |
 foreverforgotten5 2008-06-30 . chapter 25So Cool! I love these. They're so good! Keep going! X3 |
 xfacexthisx 2008-06-19 . chapter 24And again: Awesome job! =)
My favorite is probably the last one:
I had the chance once
Everything was in my grasp
I couldn't do it
It's so sad, but good. |
 xfacexthisx 2008-06-19 . chapter 23Awesome job! ^_^
I couldn't pick a favorite though. =/ |
 xfacexthisx 2008-06-19 . chapter 22Great job once again! ^_^
My favorite for this chapter:
So, you want respect?
Well then, my dear alchemist
Grow up and earn it
Hehe. =] That amused me. |
 xfacexthisx 2008-06-19 . chapter 21I like these. I think I have two favorites:
Acting out of love
It was an unhealthy wish
You must forgive us
and:
How could you do that?
I thought I taught you better
You two are expelled
The first one I like just because. End of story. The second one made me giggle with the humor of it. =) |
 xfacexthisx 2008-06-19 . chapter 20Great haiku, though I am once again at a loss as to my favorite in this chapter. Well, good job anyways. ^_^ |
 xfacexthisx 2008-06-19 . chapter 19I love the Mustang haiku in this chapter! They're really good. Especially this one:
My young alchemist
I'm not here to be your friend
"That is an order"
It's even got a hint of humor to it. =) |
 xfacexthisx 2008-06-19 . chapter 18Great job on all of these! I don't know which one is my favorite in this chapter though... =/ |
 Flitter~Flutter 2008-06-14 . chapter 24 You did a Majhal/Karin one?! Yippe!
(Although I really don't like those two, as Majhal's a freak and Karin's a jellyfish, I've always thought they are never paid enough attention so it was cool you did one for them!) =)
Good job! Looking forward to more haiku! |
 deideidei 2008-06-11 . chapter 1I like Al's Haiku A lot! |
 Flitter~Flutter 2008-06-09 . chapter 22 These were sweet! Write more! pwetty-pwease?
Could you do more with Nina? Or maybe one with Tucker (though I hate his guts?) Or some for Barry the Chopper? Oh, heck, even Karin and Majhal though they weren't really very important characters? Pwease?
Ah heck, your haiku are too cool for words... |
 Flitter~Flutter 2008-06-09 . chapter 2 These are awesome!
Some of them make me laugh, some of them are sad, some of them are just random, but all of them are cool.
I have never really been able to grasp the art of haiku, sadly...
"The artistic alchemy"...wow...=)
Really more amazing if you wrote them at 4:30 in the morning by cellphone light...
I've never really grasped the art of cellphones either... |
 SpanishPirate 2008-06-09 . chapter 22I LOVE THESE!
much love to these haiku =D |