I love this. Its so sweet and pure and pretty. I like these types of Lily/Snape stories

What a sweet and original gift that took time, effort and a little thought to make and do. Much better than something bought by some rich prat called Pothead.

Very cute little story. Loved the idea of the "Memory in a bottle". Wish something like this did exist.

I love this story. It’s really sweet and very imaginative. I love how you’ve portrayed his awkwardness and her sunk in just a few lines. The idea of him having allergies is so fitting. It’s a great little detail.

sweet

That was really cute. That memory sounds so cute, and the gift was great. It was really sweet of Severus to get it for Lily.

Good job!

xox Sacha

First off, cool invention, I would love to have sigh but at last magic.. anyway cute cute cute cute one shot. I love it and it's thought just like Sev.