 rpln 2009-06-18 . chapter 2I like this story. I hope there will eventually be more of it.
Oh, and since you said that you aren't really up to date with the show (I'm not either >_>) here's some sites you can try for reference purposes if you'd like.
http://en./wiki/Pok%C3%A9mon_(anime)
http://bulbapedia./wiki/Main_Page
/index2.shtml |
 Shinnie The Meanie 2009-01-07 . chapter 2Oh wow, I'm so glad I found this palletshipping story. I liked Ash's and Gary's interactions with each other and how IC you kept them both.
Hope to see more from this story soon! Like your other reviewers, I'm very interested where this story will go to. |
 Teh Wonderful Crack Fairy 2008-11-26 . chapter 2Gary is starting to remind me of the character Gary from Bully. (Minus the plots for World Domination. xD) Well I'm interested now, and if I decide to stop being lazy I might comment when you put more chapters up. |
 Stormy1x2 2008-09-11 . chapter 1I loved the last line of part 2 - that Gary needs someone he can trust. :D Really makes me look forward to whatever's coming up next! |
 mochiusagi 2008-09-01 . chapter 2hehe I think I know who ash really wants alone time with. Please update soon! |
 JapAngela 2008-08-04 . chapter 2You have my attention!
I love the random way this chapter started. XD //"I don't like pickles."// Gary's little suggestion about Ash and Oak too, lulz.
And I'm curious to how this will be continued. Hmmhmm. Whenever you update, I'll know, 'cause this is totally going on my alerts. :) |
 CakeStealer 2008-07-14 . chapter 2Awesome story so far! Please keep up the good work! =) |
 Willikins 2008-07-08 . chapter 2Hmm. I'm really excited to see where this story is headed. I can sense a lot of potential in it, and I like your writing style.
Keep up the good work!
~Willikins |
 Mantineus 2008-06-28 . chapter 2Interesting, I can not wait to read more! |
 Mikazuki Hime 2008-06-26 . chapter 2Actually, it's lots of fun when you haven't seen all the series, because then everything is new and original and your not just following the episodes. Anyways, looks pretty good, so keep the updates coming! |
 GintaxAlvissForever 2008-06-26 . chapter 2So you finallu update huh? Interesting. :)
Can't wait for the next chapter...I got no comment really though.
Ah...OakShipping. Whatever that OakxAsh pairing was called. -_- |
 saku-enjie 2008-06-26 . chapter 2yay! Finally updated! XD
Continue soon! :) |
 Juanaxu 2008-06-05 . chapter 1Just wondering, are you ever planning to update this? It's a really great start. ^_^ |
 saku-enjie 2008-05-21 . chapter 1Ohh, please update :) |
 CrunkTundra 2008-04-21 . chapter 1Really good start! You could be more detailed though, it was a little short. Please write more! I can't wait to see what happens next! |