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rpln
2009-06-18 . chapter 2
I like this story. I hope there will eventually be more of it.

Oh, and since you said that you aren't really up to date with the show (I'm not either >_>) here's some sites you can try for reference purposes if you'd like.

http://en./wiki/Pok%C3%A9mon_(anime)

http://bulbapedia./wiki/Main_Page

/index2.shtml
Shinnie The Meanie
2009-01-07 . chapter 2
Oh wow, I'm so glad I found this palletshipping story. I liked Ash's and Gary's interactions with each other and how IC you kept them both.

Hope to see more from this story soon! Like your other reviewers, I'm very interested where this story will go to.
Teh Wonderful Crack Fairy
2008-11-26 . chapter 2
Gary is starting to remind me of the character Gary from Bully. (Minus the plots for World Domination. xD) Well I'm interested now, and if I decide to stop being lazy I might comment when you put more chapters up.
Stormy1x2
2008-09-11 . chapter 1
I loved the last line of part 2 - that Gary needs someone he can trust. :D Really makes me look forward to whatever's coming up next!
mochiusagi
2008-09-01 . chapter 2
hehe I think I know who ash really wants alone time with. Please update soon!
JapAngela
2008-08-04 . chapter 2
You have my attention!

I love the random way this chapter started. XD //"I don't like pickles."// Gary's little suggestion about Ash and Oak too, lulz.

And I'm curious to how this will be continued. Hmmhmm. Whenever you update, I'll know, 'cause this is totally going on my alerts. :)
CakeStealer
2008-07-14 . chapter 2
Awesome story so far! Please keep up the good work! =)
Willikins
2008-07-08 . chapter 2
Hmm. I'm really excited to see where this story is headed. I can sense a lot of potential in it, and I like your writing style.

Keep up the good work!

~Willikins
Mantineus
2008-06-28 . chapter 2
Interesting, I can not wait to read more!
Mikazuki Hime
2008-06-26 . chapter 2
Actually, it's lots of fun when you haven't seen all the series, because then everything is new and original and your not just following the episodes. Anyways, looks pretty good, so keep the updates coming!
GintaxAlvissForever
2008-06-26 . chapter 2
So you finallu update huh? Interesting. :)

Can't wait for the next chapter...I got no comment really though.

Ah...OakShipping. Whatever that OakxAsh pairing was called. -_-
saku-enjie
2008-06-26 . chapter 2
yay! Finally updated! XD
Continue soon! :)
Juanaxu
2008-06-05 . chapter 1
Just wondering, are you ever planning to update this? It's a really great start. ^_^
saku-enjie
2008-05-21 . chapter 1
Ohh, please update :)
CrunkTundra
2008-04-21 . chapter 1
Really good start! You could be more detailed though, it was a little short. Please write more! I can't wait to see what happens next!
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