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| Sovereign of Silence3 2008-07-21 ch 9, | abuseNice chapter, glad you updated! But I'm a bit confused about the choices given to Hephaestion. The woman says that if she saves Hephaestion, he'll become king and whatnot, but then she'll kill Alexander? And if she chooses to "save" Alexander by letting him go home free, what will she do to Hephaestion? She slit his throat and put a flower there so I'm a bit confused if she's trying to kill him or what. Thanks for updating! I look forward to the next chapter. |
| phae 2008-07-09 ch 1, anon. | abusege, baliansword, it's been awhile since you've written anything. How are you? I know I miss you! -Anonymous |
| Jess 2008-05-06 ch 8, anon. | abuseseriously, WHAT A TEASE! I love this story, something about it is incrdibly intriguing. Keep up the brilliant writing. You're the BEST! Jess P.S. I added some more guys to our list...but it doesn't matter; I still drew Jared Leto...: ) tehehee. |
| Sovereign of Silence3 2008-05-02 ch 7, | abusehmm...bagoas didn't do it. i kinda like him for some reason, dunno why. yeah it was a bit short and the ending with not quite enuf closure, but it's all good! loved the chapter. take your time, you've got quite a mystery going here! keeps us readers on the edge of our seats! |
| Jess 2008-04-29 ch 7, anon. | abuseoh my gosh! this whole chapter is just a way for you to tease me! Obviosly Hephastion is going to live because we all know how he really died. However, it is killing me waiting for the next chapter! COMPLETELY BRILLIANT! write and write and write and write! Jess |
| Sovereign of Silence3 2008-04-27 ch 6, | abuseI had meant to read this sooner, truly! But I just got caught up in other things. At least I got to skip the waiting time in between chapters:) Great story so far! I can't believe...Bagoas poisoning Hephaestion? Guess I should have saw it coming...Can't wait to hear what's next! |
| CatherineWinner 2008-04-25 ch 6, | abusei can't even explain how happy I am you updated! thanks so much and this chapter was amazing! I hope you post soon!!~ |
| Jess 2008-04-24 ch 6, anon. | abuseI love that it has become a habbit to check for new chapters everytime i log off of the internet, otherwise i totally would have had to wait to read this! HOLY CRAP! I didn't even see that comming! Brilliant turn of events! I am so excited fot the next chapter! Keep writing amazing one. : ) Jess |
| System1988 2008-04-16 ch 1, | abuseDear Michelle, It's Pauline. As i told you i really enjoy your writing from your very first novels to the last chapter of "gone". I can see your writing style improving through time and yet remaining, in a strange way, the same, a thing that really charms me a lot. You always approach the characters with great respect as far as their feelings and reactions are concerned. I'm really looking forward for the next chapters of "Gone" since it's has been a while since you posted the last chapter. I hope you are ok. My job in the Ministry of Culture is really a tiring one and you will be pleased to know that reading "Gone" and all of your works is the one of the things that eases and calms me. Best wishes from a hardcore fan! |
| Jess 2008-04-11 ch 5, anon. | abuseMichelle, I absolutely LOVE this story! I can't wait for the next chapter! AH! THIS IS SO GOOD AND ONLY GETTING BETTER! You are my favorite writer- EVER! yeah, you even beat Nicholas Sparks, Dean Koontz, and Stephenie Meyer. Now that is saying something. Stay amazing, and i'll see you tomorrow night! Jess |
| HavenRain 2008-04-08 ch 5, | abuseI LOVE this story! I know how it really ended, but...just this once, can we have a happy ending...please? *Bats eyes as bottom lip quivers* Well, I did not like Cassander sneaking around, but his last statement leads me to think he cares more than he lets on...hm. |
| roxene 2008-04-08 ch 5, anon. | abuseLately I've read a lot of stories about Hephaestion and Alexander and this is probably going to be one of my favourites! You are very goog in describing their feelings. So I wish you and also them good luck - Can't wait to see them finally together! (not seeing them together is no option for me) |
| CatherineWinner 2008-04-07 ch 4, | abuse*g* i love this story but I need so much more! It's to bloody short! oMg! I love it though, their both so stubborn but they love each other so much! hope you post soon!!~ |
| Jess 2008-04-03 ch 4, anon. | abuseoh my gosh! This is so dpressing and yet so romantic at the same time! why do they both have to be so stubborn! oy! if only they would get over themselves and admit that they still love one another! I'm so frustrated! AHH!! On the other hand, it is so sweet how much they worry for eachother. I mean, Hephaestion not wanting to frighten Alexander with his illness, and Alexander freaking out over Hephaestion's health. Aw... : ) Well, thank you for the "welcome home jess" notice. it made my day. I mean seriously, i'm reading alexander and hephaestion love stories and all of a sudden- BAM! There's my name! it's amazing! tehehee! I did miss you though. : ) Jess |
| yunsuk. 2008-04-02 ch 4, | abusewow. alexander you found out now?!?! lol please update soon, it's very addicting! -trangie |