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Reviews For: Oh, My SG1

Latios151 2008-07-01 ch 1,	abuseInteresting story. Please continue it! ^^
john 2008-07-01 ch 1, anon.	abuseGood story so far, please continue. One thing though, it's unlikely the the Stargate activation would do anything other than tickle the Goddesses since they don't exist in that dimension unless they choose to.
Gyre 2008-05-28 ch 1,	abuseWell this is interesting. Knowing the trouble magnet O'Neill is, how long till Mara, or Hild show up?
Chargone 2008-05-11 ch 1,	abusehehe. ok, this story NEEDS another chapter. done well, it has potential to be truly awesome :) you're right about temples though. guess such things are just so common in japan that no one really questions it. personal opinion? it's there because it would be needed. deities can... arrange... things like that :) hehe. regardless. well written, though it does suffer a little from the standard fanfic problem of not quite being able to make descriptions of newly introduced characters flow properly. at least they're not also excessively and pointlessly detailed. keep up the good work. checks alert button
Tuisto 2008-03-29 ch 1,	abuseThis is an interesting concept. But the execution is rather bad. Firstly, Megumi should be in the dark that Keiichi's "roommates" are in fact goddess', much less knowing about Skulds supposed future-sight, or having Urd educate her as to goddessly abilities. Secondly, the idea of dimension hopping through the Stargate is impractical as the Gate doesn't work that way... at least not intentionally. It would make a better story if it were the Dimensional Mirror continuity from SG1, which would tie nicely into AMG as the temple relic being a "magic" mirror. Thus it could be Skuld being nosy, digging up the Dimensional Mirror and "accidentally" transporting the SG1 team to Nekomi -THAT- way. A far more logical, and in keeping with AMG character humor, and SG1 unlucky scenario, plot. Thirdly, The SG teams acceptance of coming through the Stargate to an alternate Japan. And along with this is the dialog of the SG team. Jack is far more flippant than you depict, he wouldn't say "we come in peace". For example. There's also a smattering of misspellings and grammatical issues, but nothing major. To sum up, I like the idea of mixing SG1 and Ah!MG (just imagine Urd delivering divine justice to Baal and the system lords), but I think the story as it sits kind of stinks. That's my take on it.
Final Knightmare 2008-03-20 ch 1,	abuseThis sounds pretty interesting, I have always been an OMG! fan and have recently gotten into SG1 so I'd relly like to see how this story plays out. Keep up the good work.
Lunatic Pandora1 2008-03-20 ch 1,	abuseSoo none of the SG1 team are at all surprised that they came to another version of earth?

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