lol must know, whats in the room? hehehe

Toya is so mean, but inside he's pretty sweet

Atsuma, are you sure you don't have a secret? XD

And seriously, Chitose doesn't seem like herself at the end O.o lol

update soon

aww! he's finally opening up!

aww! and yay! X3 Teeheeeeeeeee!

Nagi: _ sugar high? Miharu-chan?

me: nuu o.o hides cookiez

lol why so evil toya

aww! small Atsuma is cute! he sounds so babyish!

aw!

I sort of imagined Toya like he is in this story but...

he seemed so nice at the beggining of the game...

I've always wondered about Atsuma and Toyas history!

this was an awesome story.

that was another nice chapter. Like a thief, not you're a thief! LOL. Good one.

That was a nice chapter. Atsuma asking about the boy Toya.

Hi there, I totally love this first chapter. Going to read chapter 2 next. I once saw an anime called Claymore and there was this girl that couldn't speak. A woman took her in and gave her a name, Clare. Which coincidentally also was her name! So funny that Atsuma gets his name while his name is Atsuma, lol.

Well I haven't played this game (been meaning to though) but Rufuszz recommended it and I gotta say I'm glad he did. Here's to hoping you get better and put up more soon.

Hell yeah. Finally, 3rd chapter. Really nice though. By the way, when will the 4th chapter posted? Don't say if you'd already discontinued this story. And by the way, I like the sentence ' Don't give up! We must look . . . ' It reminds me of someone I knew. lol

Sorry I'm late . . .

Well, I like the way you described Snow Fairy as 'No matter how difficult life is . . . .' .

Such a motivation in life, and a little melancholic for me.

Keep up and go forward, lol . . .

Oh this is very interesting so far! I always wondered what it was that made Atsuma and Toya so close and I'd like to see where you go with this. Good work! x

The story is nice, but I guess I recognized 'strange?' words or maybe it's just my feeling. Keep going with the story . .