Lovely. Words can't begine to describe how much I love your work.

Simly beautiful!

Oh,that was so sweet.I wanted to cry when he told her what she meant to him.It's so true isn't it?Why can't DC see this?

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If I am understanding this right, this is happening when Clark and Lois are a couple, and when Bruce and Diana are a couple. Nothing good will come of this. This will all end in tears. It however does explain why Bruce and Diana aren't together in Batman Beyond. Well written, but if you continue this things will hit the fan, and Superman might get another funeral.

Aw! That was so cute, with just the right amount of mush! Very enjoyable read!

Truly well written. There is always room for improvement, but you did an amazing job in such a small amount of time. Maybe it is due to my ineptivity to writing romance that I find this profoundly great...whatever it is: you have my thanks. I enjoyed the read. Though...I'm still all for Diana and Bruce...

always,

Serenity202

YAY! For a moment I thought she was going to leave him. Glad she didn't. Look forward to the next one.