I like how u made the bonding

that was good loved it

if don rode to the hospital in the ambulance with charlie then how did his car get there?

hey! so this was really good! i know, i was dissapointed with that part of the ep, i felt like it was such a good opportunity to get some major charlie angst. the only thing was when they were at the hospital, where did the car come from? cuz didn't don ride in the ambulance? other than that it was awesome!

Amazing story, I absolutely loved it.

That was really good! This show's amazing, and I really liked your version. And...the best line was the:

"Knowing that Don was his superman, Charlie decided he'd tell his brother. Don would be sure to fix it."

I adored the 'superman' part. Great story!

Nice!

I like your version of this episode much better! :)

I am SO glad someone rewrote that part of the episode! Thank you! I'd have liked Charlie to be a little worse off of course-can't help myself, lol. This was FAR better than the real episode. :) Awesome, thanks!

PaulaXan

I'm so happy to have you back. Besides a few errorsthsi was great. But you always produce winners.

that was a nice take on a great episode!

that was awesome! great job!