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Madison Bellows
2008-03-20
ch 10,
abuseI love Danny's last line (even if I still can't get into FM radio). And I am also glad I could help our muses find their way back home (hopefully, crossing fingers and toes). I think it may have been good to focus on short attention span writing instead of our epics, which I know for me can sometimes feel daunting. Best of luck and thanks for taking the challenge!
Madison Bellows
2008-03-20
ch 9,
abusePowerful and compelling and fits in so well with your current storylines. Seriously depressing but in a well written kind of way where you really feel for your character.
Madison Bellows
2008-03-20
ch 8,
abuseI am going to have to find this song now if this is what it inspired! Cute chapter that made me giggle in a twisted way.
Madison Bellows
2008-03-20
ch 7,
abuseSMACKED! :) That is all.
Madison Bellows
2008-03-20
ch 6,
abuseSomehow the thought of a Danny/Flack fight made my mind go in a very dark and naughty direction...regardless, this is an emotionally charge ficlet that I could really see going somewhere.
Madison Bellows
2008-03-20
ch 5,
abusePerhaps our OCs should start an all girl band? Cute chapter!
Madison Bellows
2008-03-20
ch 4,
abuseAw sad angsty chapter, but great writing even if sniffle inducing.
Madison Bellows
2008-03-20
ch 3,
abuseTornadoes suck. And I can only imagine one in the city. *shivers* we had some after Katrina, which was totally kicking you while you were down and that one in ATL was scary too (I have tons of family there). I think Danny is the sweetest in this chapter, I ache just thinking about 20 flights of stairs!
Madison Bellows
2008-03-20
ch 2,
abuseFirst, I had forgotten about that movie until you posted this and it was such a cute movie and second this chapter is adorable! I am seeing this costume theme forming...
Madison Bellows
2008-03-20
ch 1,
abuseWow, what a way to kick this off, ya got me hooked!
Aphina
2008-03-20
ch 10,
abuseThat was a locvely scene, i shows the realtionship between Danny and Linds ansd it made me smile that she was wrong.
Aphina
2008-03-20
ch 9,
abuseI think this one was beautiful, i shows you how bad things can really get sometuimes!
Aphina
2008-03-20
ch 8,
abuselol that was so cool, made me smile., high five!
Aphina
2008-03-20
ch 7,
abuseThis was reallyu sweet I could really see this conversation taking place between thr e two of them.
Aphina
2008-03-20
ch 6,
abuseA prelude to the future? lol I loved this chapter, we rarely see the two fight and now ook zaat them!
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