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| Madison Bellows 2008-03-20 ch 10, | abuseI love Danny's last line (even if I still can't get into FM radio). And I am also glad I could help our muses find their way back home (hopefully, crossing fingers and toes). I think it may have been good to focus on short attention span writing instead of our epics, which I know for me can sometimes feel daunting. Best of luck and thanks for taking the challenge! |
| Madison Bellows 2008-03-20 ch 9, | abusePowerful and compelling and fits in so well with your current storylines. Seriously depressing but in a well written kind of way where you really feel for your character. |
| Madison Bellows 2008-03-20 ch 8, | abuseI am going to have to find this song now if this is what it inspired! Cute chapter that made me giggle in a twisted way. |
| Madison Bellows 2008-03-20 ch 7, | abuseSMACKED! :) That is all. |
| Madison Bellows 2008-03-20 ch 6, | abuseSomehow the thought of a Danny/Flack fight made my mind go in a very dark and naughty direction...regardless, this is an emotionally charge ficlet that I could really see going somewhere. |
| Madison Bellows 2008-03-20 ch 5, | abusePerhaps our OCs should start an all girl band? Cute chapter! |
| Madison Bellows 2008-03-20 ch 4, | abuseAw sad angsty chapter, but great writing even if sniffle inducing. |
| Madison Bellows 2008-03-20 ch 3, | abuseTornadoes suck. And I can only imagine one in the city. *shivers* we had some after Katrina, which was totally kicking you while you were down and that one in ATL was scary too (I have tons of family there). I think Danny is the sweetest in this chapter, I ache just thinking about 20 flights of stairs! |
| Madison Bellows 2008-03-20 ch 2, | abuseFirst, I had forgotten about that movie until you posted this and it was such a cute movie and second this chapter is adorable! I am seeing this costume theme forming... |
| Madison Bellows 2008-03-20 ch 1, | abuseWow, what a way to kick this off, ya got me hooked! |
| Aphina 2008-03-20 ch 10, | abuseThat was a locvely scene, i shows the realtionship between Danny and Linds ansd it made me smile that she was wrong. |
| Aphina 2008-03-20 ch 9, | abuseI think this one was beautiful, i shows you how bad things can really get sometuimes! |
| Aphina 2008-03-20 ch 8, | abuselol that was so cool, made me smile., high five! |
| Aphina 2008-03-20 ch 7, | abuseThis was reallyu sweet I could really see this conversation taking place between thr e two of them. |
| Aphina 2008-03-20 ch 6, | abuseA prelude to the future? lol I loved this chapter, we rarely see the two fight and now ook zaat them! |