Aww it's so sweet. I could totally relate to the story. Thanks for writing. I loved it

RR,

This was a heart-warming piece. However, I must give you fair warning, just as aone writer wanting to 'watch the back' of another...

The first lines of the song's third and fifth stanzas contain words considered in most circles as inappropriate for a 'K Plus' rated story. Plase consider the following options:

One, you could change those lyrics...or

Two, you could change the rating to 'T'. It would still be found in a general archive search, but you would at least take the responsible approach to the matter.

Just some (intending to be) constructive input from...

Your friend in writing,

The Samurai Crunchbird