Omg, this is REALLY well written! You have really captured Sakuno's character as well as Ryoma's. It's a really simple story and plot line, but you're writing really made it blossom (?). Ha ha, sorry for sounding like a freak but good job! Yay, I can't wait for more!
Keep writing!

..aww..i wonder what will RYOMA do..!!..m..

..i think it spells as uiss too..!!..i don't know too..!!..kyaa..!!..FUJI is such a sadist ne..??..like it..!!..^^,

..kyaa..i like the way you modified on how did they meet..!!..but SAKUNO was really humiliated there..lolz..!!..^^,

..i still have lots more to read..!!..^^,

kyaah! its a cliffhanger! please update as soon as possible okay?

Dude, you need to continue this (and I was thinking of that before I got to the cliffy). It's too good to just let fade away into internet obscurity. I thoroughly enjoyed this fic. Even though it was AU, it worked. They were still in character. Kudos, lady.

About the second chapter, I just wanted to point out something, since it doesn't look like you know it. Rackets get out of date rather quickly. The technology on making rackets have advanced a lot (they're now lighter, stronger, etc), so while it was sweet to see Sumire give Sakuno her old racket, in real life, that wouldn't be such a good idea. An old racket like that (which would be at the very least, thirty years old) would hinder Sakuno more than help her, and Sumire would know better. And if that racket was even older (more than likely), it was probably wooden.

Also, you gotta figure in the grip size, etc. Sumire would more than likely take Sakuno to a sports store and get a proper racket for her, then give Sakuno her old one. It doesn't really matter though, cuz I doubt your other readers think that much about it or know enough about tennis to have caught it. I can overlook it since the rest of your fic more than makes up for it.

Adding this to my C2. Hopefully, it'll increase your readership and get you motivated to continue. Looking forward to how you'll develop this! =D

heres your chance sakuno! ^^ great job by the way!

Why must they look murderous? Poor Sakuno and she donesn't even know it's her's. I can't wait to see what Ryoma will say to her about the whole situation, with his eyes being murderous and all.

W-O-W what is he going to
do!

Aiko: Great story!
Mina: Update soon! I can't wait to find out what happens next...

GAh! Oh my goodness! Echizen is mad! Real mad! And she was that dense! I can't believe it! I was yelling my head off when I read this chapter. I can't believe that a certain sadistic menace made something so sadistic that I think that he had gone too much, for my own being! -_-

I dislike it whenever Sakuno was tense with Echizen. Damn you, Echizen! Making her tense as usual! Gr...

Hahaha! I must be overreacting. I love this fanfic of yours so far. I'm quite addicted to it, ya know. That's what I am. Whenever I'm interested in a new story, I would definitely put that ficcie in my mind, wondering what would eventually happen next. Good God, I was so happy when you updated the chapter 3! And a lil bit furious when I read the last part:


Was it just her or did his golden eyes look strangely…murderous?


I swear that if ever he is mad or something due to Sakuno's painting or just making her nervous (like most of the time during in the anime), I will definitely teach that brat to be a proper man! Sheesh. Woah, again with my overreacting statement.


Anyway, I'm loving this story so far and I will continue to love it. If only you'll made it a bit longer so I would write more in my review. But then again, you updated a little sooner so I'm glad that you did. Hehehe...

But since you made the story intriguing, I will not hesitate to write this in my review: PLEASE UPDATE, WOMAN! I AM ROOTING FOR YOU AND FOR YOUR FIC! GAH, I'M CURIOUS OF WHAT'S INSIDE OF THAT BRAT'S MIND!


Hehehe, forgive me for this quite particular nonsense review...


~Alyssa (FC)

cliffhanger!! oh no, poor sakuno. what a nice mess you put them in. the story's getting interesting, so please keep it up!! i'm excited for your next update.

fuji is very very evil :)

Uh-No!! Please don't say somethingh that you'll regret Ryoma!

ok..i'am going to kill fuji!! its all his fault!! poor sakuno-chan..ughh!!

update soon please!!