Great story!

aw

great one-shot!

That was very sweet

oh, so perfect. i love it.

You did a beautiful job, it shows Jasper's touchness but still concern and love that he has for the family and Alice. Your work is just a continuation of what I believe Stephanie Myer would want to portray in those characters eyes. You did a great job, please keep it up. I love the coninutation of the story regardless of the author and you make it worth the time reading these as it truly feels like I'm back in the story unlike a lot of other fans adaptions. Thank you!

I loved it :)

very well written and very sweet :)

Very sweet.

great :0)

This is great. I read a story the other day comparing Emmet and Rosalie--I think it's by white reflections12 'Significant Somethings'--but it compares them to Jalice. And I think what's so great about them it's that if you think about it Jasper is a very quiet, shy but sweet character that doesn't fit in well with the rest of the Cullens, like charismatic Alice does. The way they fit together in their own quiet but powerful relationship is beautiful--and I think you do a great job writing that relationship in this story.

Cute!

I don't normally review, but I just have to say that your writing is stunningly beautiful and in a subtle way. Your fic was a delight to read and I have to say bravo. x x x x x

Really Really good!!

that was nice! i really enjoy stories like these- "in between" scenes. well done :)

-Ivy

The Alice/Jasper conversation is so natural and "believable" in this short.

I absolutely understand why everyone praises your writing now. I'm really excited to start "Blue Moon" on Saturday now! Is it Saturday yet?!