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Lucifina BloodRavyn 7/21/08 . chapter 1
I think it was good. But it should have gone a little further. I dont know, maybe I'm just wicked like that. And forbidden love is exciting. _

Good work.
gothchicka94 4/30/08 . chapter 1
hahahahaha oh damn that is so fucked up hahahahaha LOL

what the hell were you thinking! OMG I i liked it though,that was interesting! LOL

LOVED IT!
XxcrystalvegamasencullenXx 4/26/08 . chapter 1
this story is getting good keep writing!Im literaly dying to know wat happens next!
LovelyPriestess 3/21/08 . chapter 1
Pfft, she can do better. Annyways... I'm glad someone posted a story (and not one about new characters)! I do feel sorry for Vanessa, though. Realistic pairing, however. :)
tethe'alla 3/21/08 . chapter 1
Bahaha! I love it. There has been such a lack of stories in the DOTM section lately and this was a wonderful refresher.

Michael is such a woman.
StarWars-Freak 3/21/08 . chapter 1
*jaw drop*

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Excellent!

SWF
Raux 3/20/08 . chapter 1
Uh, yeah.

You need another story to go with this. Definiately.

Hmm, I wonder what inspired this. Lol.

Excellent job, my friend. I really loved it.

I never thought of the combination of Catty and Michael.

It's a good one.

-Em.
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