A well-done wrap-up. Triple bang-up job!

Double bang-up job!

Bang-up job! Well worth the wait.

Okay, I finished. _

I hadn't read this for a LONG time... I just happened to click aimlessly on the crossovers section and SAW IT UPDATED! With so many chapters more from where I had left off! Thanks! _

Hey Clare. I thought I would be nice and review this so you'll have something to read when you come back from Maine (*cough* beatch *cough*) LOL. Anyway, you know I love the story. The whole "Who this his guy" and having it be Donald was funny. Haha. Harry Potter...psh. I can't wait to see what happens. This is really random, but hey, I'm a random person. I would have reviewed URD, lol, but I've done that a lot. :-/

anyway. see ya around.

-Mollie

Bang-up job! Now, if the next update could be uploaded prior to Labor Day, that would be even MORE TERRIFIC!

Uh-oh! How's the Doc Brown posse going to straighten THIS one out?

Welcome back! Great update.

Thanks for the prompt reply...and the recommendation.

Bang-up job, as far as imaginative storylines go. But, I'm afraid the others are right about the sentence spacing. It WAS more comprehensible in the first ten chapters, due to NOT being packed together like the proverbial sardines.

As good as ever, creatively speaking. But, the sentence-spacing was undeniably much better in the earlier chapter. Please, please, please; go back to that style!

The sentences were so bunched together, I almost MISSED the so-called slur. I mean, you wee right. It was NOT used disparagingly. And, let's face it; no one ever criticized the Doobie Brothers for naming themselves after a slang term for marijuana cigarette!

Diagnosis: no pun intended, but the waters keep getting deeper and muddier. Observation: Doc is due for another life-saving brainstorm. Prescription: as before, none needed. Great job!

Uh-oh, boys and girls! Can you say, "serious repercussion?" I knew you could. Now,let's read the next suspenseful chapter.