Hm... I did not think it would be slash... Because one does not stick one's penis inside another man's penis. It is impossible.

Then again, I write slash myself, and have been doing so since 2003, so I should know somewhat of it by now. :)

I like your way with words here, though.

Now how does one's stomach fill with pleasure? It makes no sense, reminds me of nausea. The euphemisms are half-thought out and make no sense with the joke you are trying to say. You may be trying to poke fun at the bad sex euphemisms but you only succeed in looking stupid.

Absolutely Brilliant!! :)

Ha!
Hilarious!

Just brilliant. That's really all I have to say.

Brilliant! I must admit I was expecting something a little more... different :P

I thought it was gonna be slash, and lots of it! How strange...

You got me. Haha... Much and his euphemisms. Good job!

lols love it ^^