Is this ever getting updated?

I've really enjoyed your stories and the style that you write in. Theres not many authors out there that have the skill of writing a fanfiction story and making it seem like a novel, but you've pulled it off. I hope that you are able to finish this story because I know what it's like to have a writer's block or at being distracted with my own attempts at writing. Again I hope you continue.

Gosh I wish you'd finish this! I was really liking it!

Great story. Looking forward to the next chapter!

I heard a line on a TV show once, that said the mark of a good story teller is to always leave them wanting more.

Well, I want more. I can't wait to read the confrontation between Dean and Chris. I want Dean to stand up for himself but something tells me he won't, or even better, Sam overhears and puts Chris in his place. I love it when Sam acts all big brother like and gets protective of Dean. Although, I'm sure I'll love however you write it.

The plot thickens. What's up with Dean's mysterious burns, and its so typical of him that he didn't want to see a doctor. I'm glad that Lori worked out a compromise and got Dean help. I like Lori. As to whether or not she or Dean hook up, thats up to you, its your story. If you decided to hook them up, I have full confidence in your ability to pull it off without the romance overtaking the story. If they remain friends or have a one night stand, thats cool too.

It has to be tough for Sam, with everything that's happening. Poor boys been throught a lot.

It think that it goes without saying that I totally loved this chapter, and I'm looking forward to the next one. I know real life can be a pain, but whenever your ready to post, I'll be waiting.

I swear this Sam is stupid. Of all the friends he has introduced to Dean, Chris is the one that degrading his brother the most. Sam seem to realized that just now, but he still left Dean alone with Chris. And Dean is just as stupid cause he won't even defend him self. Aargh, it's really frustrating.

So great to see you back with this story ...I had been wondering...
Loving hurt!Dean and the mysterious burns. You went close to the brink with Lori but I for one am glad you pulled back..just wouldn't feel right to me with the timing and situation of the story. Although you have made her extremely likeable!

this is great!

I am so happy this story is back. It's one of my old time favorite. U've got nothing to apologies for. We all have busy lives and it always amazes me that people like you take the time to write these awesomely, entertaining stories. It sucks when a fic this good can't be weekly updated but I for one am just happy u created it in the first place. Now about the chapter. I had to read the previous one cuz I didn't remember where we left off and even so I can't for the life of me remember why is Chris such a jerk. God I wanted to smack him.And why isn't Sam putting him in his place? I like Lori very much and u can put me in the "I want Lori and Dean together" camp. I have to admit that, just like Sam I think the best part about this is that it's so cool to have so many people know about Sam and Dean. They all know what they do and they all understand, love that. Lovely chapter. It's so good to have u back

It's always wonderful to see an update from you - and you know we'll always wait for the next one... but I so hope the next one will be soon! I can't wait for the confrontation with Chris -- my fingers are crossed that Dean's hands have healed to the point that he'll be able to punch him out!!LOL!
Don't take your gently prodding for granted - I'm sure it's that my writing is nowhere in your league, but regardless of how many reviews I get or how long between updates, I never get emails or messages asking for me to continue - so do know that you are loved and missed -- and waited on!

Yay your back - im soo glad. Great update, nice to see worried Sam looking out for his bro. Chris is a git!

Have to say Im glad you decided against romance, im just not a fan of romance stories - give me action all the way! But whatever you do im sure it will be good.

Cheers
Rhesa

Oh man! I so want to know what's going to go on between Dean and that jerk, Chris! That will be very interesting.

For sheer enjoyment, I went back and reread the other chapters before reading this one and was reminded once again what a great fic this is.

Amazing that Dean's healing up so quickly. Nice feature for a hunter. :D

Glad you decided not to have Dean and Lori get romantically involved. I might have to scratch her eyes out. :( It'll be much more interesting this way, too. I do like her a lot. Thanks for giving us someone to wish evil onto, too. Chris should have something horrible happen to him. :D

Really great chappy, hon. Loved it. You hurt our boy so nicely and do bitchy!Sam exactly right. lol

You're back! i'm so excited. i really liked the chapter! i think i was a little disconnected from what happened in the first 4 chapters, so I might go back and have a re-read at some point. Again, great job...can't wait to read the next one!

Okay, it took me a bit longer to get through this because I had forgotten completely what had happened in the previous chapter and had to go remind myself.

This was sweet, good, even somewhat tingly with Dean's waking up in the Impala.

I just want to say, though, that your a/n made me sad. We get so very little in life that is completely ours -- the stories we tell (unless specifically written for someone else) come from inside of us.

It's true, I'm not a fan of "romance" stories in general. And I do not seek them out in the SPN fandom (which is perhaps hypocritical considering some of the stories I've written). But I think there is a distinct difference between a "romance" story and a story where one of the main characters has a romantic interlude with another.

This story -- even with only 5 chapters posted -- is already so much more than a "romance." Dean and Lori having a relationship is (in my mind) simply a by-product of two attractive people thrust into an unusual situation.

You are one of my favorite fandom writers and a sweet person besides that. I would read regardless. And I respect your decision to drop a plotline you had originally intended to play out. I just wish you had come to that decision because you felt it was for the good of the story inside of you and not because others felt strongly against it.

Just my two cents. You're doing a great job with this. :)

Well I really don't see your problem, because I enjoyed this chapter very very much. It got hurt Dean and caring/protective Sam, what else do I need? I'm a happy reader *g*
So stop worring you're doing a great job! A little faster update wouldn't hurt next time, as my brain went into overdrive to remember what happened before, but I survived *lol*

Take care
Jenny