hehehe, go johanna! betcha the administrator wouldnt have though a little girl could open up a serious can of whoop ass! lol.

i dont think, however, that the word "jerk" would be around in the time that ST takes place...but otherwise, excelent!

will they finally adopt the girls and how will thier life change with now having to take care of 2 kid's?

will anything happen to the little girl like sickness or something?

will Johanna get sick at the same time and lucy is relieved so now johanna was exposed to whatever it was so she won;t get it again and lucky and ben take care of 2 sick kids at the same time?

will the little girl tell them about the orphanage?

Reading your writing is a treat-it really is very good. But there is an unsavory trend in your stories, and that is that they are all very short. It's like you're teasing the readers-giving them a small taste of a treat and then ripping it away from them just as they are beginning to enjoy it. All right, maybe that's an exaggeration, but a longer story would be excellent.

Johanna is such a brave and sweet girl just like her mother and father. Such a cute story!

Wow. Johanna's really brave. I like this story. it's good.

i dont know much about sweeney todd,

but good story!

Interesting. I like it, but I have a question. What is AU? What does that mean? I've been wondering for a while... I am not an idiot...

pretty good. not a big fan of lucy though. bloody courtesan.