I loved it!
you have to write more battles, I absolutely adore when Jasper en Bella go all military stratgics together and and smash emmet's ego!
Hope you write some more

OMG this is absolutely my favorite story ever! I was laughing so hard omg my feackin' stumach hurt! I realy love it!

This was amazing! Epic! Please add more! Pleasepleasepleasepleasepleasepleasepleasepleasepleasepleasepleasepleasepleasepleasepleasepleasepleasepleasepleasepleasepleasepleasepleasepleasepleasepleasepleasepleasepleasepleasepleasepleasepleasepleasepleasepleasepleasepleasepleasepleasepleasepleasepleasepleasepleasepleasepleasepleasepleasepleasepleasepleasepleasepleasepleasepleasepleasepleasepleasepleasepleaseplease
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this was so good and funny! i laughed so much! and when bella attacked their fort, that was omg! i seriously saw it in my head in slow motion! well the whole story was great! and i really hope you'll put up more chapters!

beautiful! :D i laughed my ** of

Loved your story! I was laughing out loud throughout the whole thing.

-Evil Laugh- awesome!! I'm not a writer but I can see its writen well (bellas plan was awesome!) the team was awesome! I think you should put in more 'battles'XD I LOVE the story!



-Kitiara Cullen

Oh my god, please please please please do a sequel! This was so funny! I cant wait for something else...

that waas soo funny

I am you 300th reviewer! I just wanted to say that I love your story (it's my shortest favorite) and that you should definitely make a sequel :D

that was a great story hope you continue it!

loved it!!

that waz so good i luved it!
i reckon u shud leave it alone itz rly gud. unless u have a rly gud idea then go 4 it!

i luved this fanfic! i was like laughing the whole time my sides hurt:) anywayy r u going to write anymoree?plz do!

Too funny! I totally did not see any of that coming. I really hope more battles are coming, especially now Edward knows what Bella is capable of!