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| Legacy Now 2008-04-12 ch 1, | abuseWip! I'm here! So sorry! *tear* (haha!) That was deep. It really made me think about Geldoblame's ambition clearly and not just like the villains on "bad" cartoon shows and how, "I'm going to take over the world!" kind of thing. Yes... You really point that out. ... Ha! People need to write better villains! haha! Bravo! ^^ |
| Brenda924 2008-03-20 ch 1, | abuseWow, this was really good. It shows a whole other side to him...I never thought if it like this. It makes me almost...like Geldoblame. 0.o Anyways, great story, like always. Keep it up! |
| Ruingaraf 2008-03-20 ch 1, | abuseNeato! I like the rhythem. But someone it reminds me of that one song. "It goes around the world, la la la la, and everybody's singing la la la la, and now the bells are ringing..." |
| crackedKatana 2008-03-20 ch 1, | abuseI LOVE it! The beginning immeadiatly reminded me of the dirt...head...thing in the end of EW, and the last few lines were espically powerful. I'm so glad you did the challenge! Anyways, really, really awesome. ^^ |