I actually don't really like Avatar, but I love your story.
The pace is absolutely perfect, not too fast or too slow.
I see a greater depth in character in your story than in the actual show. Thanks for writing such a good example of fanfiction.

Alright I have tried to be very patient but women, YOU SERIOUSLY NEED TO UPDATE! Now! It has been 4 1/2 months since you have updated! I read Eclipse, and loved it (it's the reason I currently read fanfic's) and so far like this story. But seriously if you don't update I WILL STOP CHECHING FOR UPDATES AND WILL NOT CONTINUE TO READ THIS STORY! (I have a fanfic account, but am to lazy to login) By the way I already deleted this story of of my fav fic's list!

Awsomeness! So far this is my fave FanFic you are the best writer ever! It's so good that I don't think you can improve it! *Cheesy Grin*

Here i though that the first few chapters was an emotional roller coaster ride like no other, I was wrong. The last few chapter that I've read had made me cry, laugh and snort (yes snort) at the amount of emotion you put in this story. Great respect to you for writing all this down, if it had made us all cry, I wonder what it does to you just to think of it and pen all this emotions down.

I'm one of those really very picky readers searching for the best fanfic of my favorite pairings, I've come across some really good ones but NONE of them made me cry and had me feel the emotions that the characters were going through.

I do hope that you complete this fan fiction, but if you don't I really do appreciate that you had it end at this Chapter.

Seriously thank you for the wonderfully great read.

Its a wonder how you are able to write such beautiful yet tragically sad words for the story. I had to leave a review here, the emotions that you had portrayed in the past few chapters together with Eclipse, just made me weep for the characters. It feels all so surreal that this is just a fan fiction of the series and not the actual story plot that is happening. Cant wait to read the other 15 chapters. I do hope you update it really soon.

Wow...this story is so amazing. You gave every single character their own space and even made your reader pity Azula. I loved the dynamics between Azula, Mai and Ty Lee the most. You made the reader see that Azula was more than just an insane, power-hungry princess, which is something that the show did not achieve (or even bother to try, if I recall correctly).

Watching your style improve through the two stories was fun to. Things that I would have pointed out if I was editing for you were eventually fixed.

You capture grief with amazing talent and apparent ease. I absolutely adored the passage about a mother's grief. And really, this whole story is about grief--I love it all!!

Hope to read the next chapter soon,
Love, Blondie Pants

This is the first FanFiction I’ve ever read that made me want to keep reading, through anything. I thought about it during school, and daydreamed about it during lectures, I imagined what could happen while doing homework, and relived what already happened in my dreams. Reading on the computer gives me headaches, but that didn’t stop me for this story, I read and took ibuprofen, read and took ibuprofen again. The headache got worse with the tears, but I couldn’t stop crying, and the heartache that followed made me want to stop, but I couldn’t. I think I’ve fallen in love with this story and I’m sure I’ll reread it just as I’ve done with my favorite books on my bookshelf. Bravo, you’ve written something amazing, you’re an incredible writer.

ALL I CAN POSSIBLY SAY THAT COULD ONLY DISTANTLY DESCRIBE WHAT I THINK OF THIS FIC IS OMIGOD!WOW!
this fic is SO FRICKIN BEAUTIFUL!i have finally decided upon my FAVOURITEST FIC EVER: VAREDHA!
the prequel was SUPERB AS WELL, but varedha just took things ot a WHOLE NEW LEVEL! i have to apologise though,i had read this earlier, in july, but as i was writing your review, the power shut off!i felt like punching the thing, and after some hectic travelling, im BACK, and as i read this fin al chapter, i started crying! OH GAWD,YOU ARE SO FANTASTIC
! icannot begin to describe how much i LOVE this fic!
the characters are as if, you've known them personally forever,and the plot is so FABULOUS! i have to say,the ending of the prequel, with zuko killing aang and everything, really set this whole fic up...you are a GENIUS!
this is one of those few tasteful zutara fics,and there is no shortage of romance,drama,thrills OR adventure and action! it was VERY realistic,considering how this is a completely fantasticaal story...the character development was SO AMAZING! i cannot thank you enough for writing this! im not sure if a sequel would be suitable, but if you DO asnother one, i WILL LOVE YOU EVEN MORE, IF THAT IS POSSIBLE XD
THANK YOU FOR WRITING THIS AWESOME FOC, as well as the previous one...you have dealt expertly with mature issues,and weaving everything into each other,was so professionally done!i am going to tell all my friends aboutn this fic,even though none of them watch avatar!but to read this as a separate storym will be an unforgettable experience by itslef! and did i mention how excellently you had all the other mini-psotrylines built into plot, such as everything that was going on with the water tribe, and sokka and suki...THAT was great as well...you made the characters very mature without getting rid of their fundamental essence. I LOVE YOU AND YOUR FIC!
LOVE,
heartinabottle

I know you haven't updated in awhile, but I really hope you do. What you've written is a work of art, it's beautiful and invokes so much emotion. This is the first time a story of any kind (news, book, radio, tv, movie, etc.) has ever made me cry more than once, whether it be from happiness or sadness. Suki's letter to Katara, every time Sokka misses his sister, Zuko feels regret, the meeting with Aang, Toph and Nimi, Nimi's death, Hakoda's birth, the reconciliation between Zuko and Katara... I've cried so many times my cheeks have tear tracks running down them, my nose is running and my eyes are all puffy and red. Let me tell you, it takes a LOT to make me cry.

Its really amazing. When I started reading the story I was expecting something from what I would want to happen. The death of toph and aang in "Eclipse" scared me. It also scared me to know that Azula would...no...HAD...killed not only her father but a little girl as well. I cried during a lot of reading and I could not believe what was going on. I read Eclipse and no matter how set I was against continuing with the sequal just because I was disappointed in knowing Toph and Aang were killed; I still went and kept reading and moved on to Varedha. This story is one of the most thrilling stories that scared me, killed me, horrified me, and gave me the real feeling of love and emotion from it's characters. No matter how I dislike the story I still continue to scare myself and make myself believe that this kinda of thing might just be happening to someone else because of the war that is still in motion now. I believe this story not only deserves a reward but deserves to be acknowledged by the world because it portrays real facts that may be happening now or happen in the future if not already in the past. I pray that this story be continued and you don't loose faith in yourself and for the sake of knowledge this story reaches the hearts of many just as it has done to mine. Please, for god's sake, PLEASE continue with this story!

I cried. No joke. This story is wonderfully written. I cried with Katara, I got frustrated with Zuko...I made tea with Iroh (lol)...the end of this chapter really made me bawl. It was bittersweet, seeing Aang, Toph and Nozomi again. The "waterworks" started coming when Toph greets her with her "Sugar Queen" nickname. Ahh! Bravo :) bravo!

I like how you used 'The Nightingale and Rose' as a reference. I knew it was familiar. But I loved it.

I cried so hard in this one. I cried for all of them and their circumstances. I don't think I could be as good as Katara, but then again, I've never loved so deeply. Things like this make me relieved that I don't live in their world. It's hard. Zuko's still a bastard...I don't understand but I can't deny that he loves her. It just sucks. I'm the kind of girl who searches for that happy ending.

I was in tears. So well done. This whole story is an emotional roller coaster that I love to ride. Thank you, thank you! I can't wait for updates.

OMG i am crying my eyes out you should have made a happier ending for eclipse WHY?! Toph cant die Zuko should have killed azula and Ozai happy ending! Why Why Why Why Why Why it is soo sad i think you are a brillant writing brilliant use fo wording but the story ended badly why why why why why why why? btw i still love your writing!