this was great. its like really seeing inside his mind. i love the way you wrote it. adding to my favs:)

Oh, wow! That was so sad. And just so beautiful. Well done.

I like this has a sort of disjointed, slightly jumbled feel to it--it's like taking a peek directly into Seifer's mind. You don't even know how excited I am that I've finally taken the time to read through several of your fics--yours is exactly the type of writing style that I love. Poetic, but without being overdone and just amazing.

Another top-notch mood piece. When it comes to treading the razor's edge between poetry and prose, nobody does it better.

I don't even like Seifer that much, but I really liked this, especially the way everything got separated with time distortions and memories and all that jazz. Awesome, awesome stuff here. PLUS I LOVE YOU.