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| Ice Dragon3 2008-07-13 ch 1, | abuseI like how you take the actual events from the anime and review them in this new light of Naruto's desire to impress Iruka. The ending was a nice touch. By ending things with a question, it accents the helplessness that Naruto feels: the idea that there -is- no answer. |
| Black-Rose23 2008-06-26 ch 1, | abuseA nice idea, but it feels unfinished. |
| Gasanechi 2008-03-22 ch 1, | abuseHm, this would be a great fic if you just continue this story, it has so much potential anyway, the fic is great and i hope that you'll continue this, that is if you want to ^_^ bai~bai~ |
| WannabeFireFox 2008-03-22 ch 1, | abuseAw poor Naruto. Trying so hard for Iruka |