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Reviews For: Acknowledgement

Ice Dragon3
2008-07-13
ch 1,
abuseI like how you take the actual events from the anime and review them in this new light of Naruto's desire to impress Iruka. The ending was a nice touch. By ending things with a question, it accents the helplessness that Naruto feels: the idea that there -is- no answer.
Black-Rose23
2008-06-26
ch 1,
abuseA nice idea, but it feels unfinished.
Gasanechi
2008-03-22
ch 1,
abuseHm, this would be a great fic if you just continue this story, it has so much potential

anyway, the fic is great and i hope that you'll continue this, that is if you want to ^_^

bai~bai~
WannabeFireFox
2008-03-22
ch 1,
abuseAw poor Naruto. Trying so hard for Iruka
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