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| SongoftheDarquePhoenix 2008-06-01 ch 1,  | abuseThis has made me go 'awe...' verry sadly every few words... ='( Poor Obito... We luffle you! |
| ChibiAliChan 2008-03-24 ch 1, | abusenice... and sad... poor kashi. the way you described it, i really wish obito was still alive. he just sounds too perfect. keep up the great work. =^-^= |
| Marquess 2008-03-20 ch 1, | abuseWe do not need to be told when it was published or what it's rated, that's already provided. Take the text out of bold, it's ridiculous when one tries to read it. A comma needs to be placed before "and" in the second sentence (first paragraph.) Your use of commas are on overkill(and then strangely enough, in one sentence you lack any commas at all.) Punctuation belongs inside of the quotations, which should be double. I'm referring to: ‘research’. |